Compact
by paully2k1

Comment:
focus :) - setzler

Technology?
by troyad

Comment:
Hmmm... sometimes i wonder if photos are submitted just for fun or if they photographer actually takes the challenge seriously. The good thing about this photo is that you rotated your subject to offest the balance... that is the beginning of a good composition :) - setzler

My future Son!
by vtruan

Comment:
This is cool technology, but as a photograph, I don't care much for it... I know this shot has deep meaning to you, but it's not something that is strong compositionally or subjectively for me... - setzler

It All Started With Sticks and Stones
by BigHusker001

Comment:
It actually all started way before that... I'm not doing a good job of fitting this photo to the challenge... - setzler

Telescopio de Conquistadores
by Isaac

Comment:
I'm not really sure how to critique this... you have photographed someone else's art, but you have added your own twist... I would have rather seen a subject that you created... - setzler

Music Technology Compared
by Delta_6

Comment:
I understand your comparison of technologies in this shot... The angle and composition of this particular photo doesn't really grab me. - setzler

Silicon City
by f0rce

Comment:
In the 'technology' challenge, I expected to see a lot of photos of circuit boards. Knowing this, I believe that these photos need to be done more creatively in an attempt to make them stand out. How could you have made this photograph more impactive? If you are new to the challenge concept, one thing you may consider is ASSUMING that there will be several other photos like yours each week. In many cases, there are! With this in mind, you need to create impact.... - setzler

Slinfast - Before & After
by amnon

Comment:
In the 'technology' challenge, I expected to see a lot of photos of circuit boards. Knowing this, I believe that these photos need to be done more creatively in an attempt to make them stand out. How could you have made this photograph more impactive? If you are new to the challenge concept, one thing you may consider is ASSUMING that there will be several other photos like yours each week. In many cases, there are! With this in mind, you need to create impact.... - setzler

Bait
by Sonifo

Comment:
I think this is a very nice shot... i love the composition... think the blue cast on the background could possibly use a little work... - setzler

Victoriana
by cameo

Comment:
very nice composition here... I love the stamp :) the lighting here is also very good... The only critique i have for you is that you maybe could try a fed different background settings... I think this one could possibly have enough detail in it to distract from your subjects somewhat. I really like the off balance sense you created with the placement of the subjects... good work :) - setzler