His Favourite color
by Hoogie

Comment:
This is extremely nice :) the shallow depth of field works very well here for me.. great detail... great shot :) = 10 - setzler

She Measures Up
by Shiiizzzam

Comment:
excellent shot :) the cross pattern of the yellow tape on the desaturated body stands out very well in this shot... great work :) = 10 - setzler

Rows
by greenem2

Comment:
This is an excellent black and white... I love the leading lines up to the bright window... great shot :) - setzler

Green Waves
by Fibre Optix

Comment:
very nice abstract... it has a glass quality to it... maybe it is glass... great shot and great 'rhythm' also :) - setzler

Stroke!
by Gordon

Comment:
excellent shot... this shot works for 'rhythm' in more ways that one... the repepating patterns and the implied motion both support the topic very well... the contrast with the black and white is also nice :) i can't really offer any improvement here... i think, maybe a horizontal mirror of this shot would be effective also... great work :) - setzler

Concentric
by smellyfish1002

Comment:
I like this shot quite a bit... 'form and function' fascinates me and i shoot a lot of similar images... great work :) - setzler

Melon Landscape
by lcamargo

Comment:
very nice work... the 'rhythm' flows nicely in your shot... the color also pops very well :) - setzler

CBR Nose Cone
by Enzo

Comment:
excellent yellow shot :) this has a nice futuristic look to it... = 10 - setzler

A Long Streak of Sunshine
by DougPaz

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Doug...

This photo is an excellent display of perspective... The vanishing point is clearly visible and the choice to center this composition as you have accents that nicely. The lighting is creating an interesting mood that I can't decide if I really like or not... Possibly if there was more light on the scene, the contrast in the foreground may be a little stronger.

I think what this image may be lacking is a strong focal point. the vanishing point of the railroad tracks seems to be the main focus of the shot. I believe that a segment of track somewhere that had a sign or somethin that stands out in the image could create a bit stronger composition...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

photo paper
by Allen

Comment:
I don't believe that the lack of focus is strengthening this photo.. - setzler