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| 04/30/2003 10:51:05 AM |
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| 04/30/2003 10:49:25 AM |
Old and retired?by samtimesComment: beautiful photo... the mood here seems to be nicely enhanced with the shallow depth of field... the transportation theme is doubled by the the bike wheels and the 'moblie' lady on the left. I particularly like the toning on the photo. It adds a mood and warmth of some sort that black and white doesn't do. excellent work... = 10 - setzler |
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| 04/30/2003 10:00:16 AM |
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| 04/30/2003 09:31:51 AM |
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| 04/30/2003 09:07:41 AM |
14th Street - Union Squareby christoComment: beautiful black and white... the motion blur here creates a nice feeling of excitement to go along with the regular hustle and bustle that is normally associated with the train stations. Good showing of 'chaos' :) = 10 - setzler |
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| 04/30/2003 08:29:49 AM |
Public Transportby LarsPaysenComment: This is a great shot... the camera angle and the motion blur are very effective. The lighting on the train is also excellent... This looks like it could be an ad for The Wall Street Journal or something :) This could be some stock broker on his way to the daily grind... excellent work... = 10 - setzler |
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| 04/29/2003 01:04:06 PM |
On Trackby CLarson557Comment: I definitely like railroad theme photos :) This one is quite interesting as well... they layout is nice and the lines all seem to work nicely together... excellent work :) - setzler |
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| 04/29/2003 09:43:51 AM |
Lone Travellerby SharQComment: I understand your dual image concept here, but this doesn't seem to fit the di/triptych theme for me... - setzler |
| 04/29/2003 09:42:33 AM |
Alishaby sherryk471Comment: this is a nice composition of portraits... i can't judge it as photography though... - setzler |
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| 04/29/2003 09:32:54 AM |
sundown on the ridgeby billsweeneyjrComment: Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Bill...
Meeting the challenge:
Definitely... sunrise/sunsets often show very beautiful elements of weather like cloud formations and nice atmospheric colors. Interestingly enough, pollution helps create some interesting sunrises and sunsets also :)
Emotional/Artistic Impact:
I think your color in this photo is probably the key. The blue and pink hues in the sky are saturated nicely and create a lot of color interest for me. I believe it needs some extras to improve this area and I will mention those in the Composition comments...
Composition:
I think this photo could be stronger it two ways. 1 - there is nothing interesting in the foreground. I would have possibly framed this differently to cut out some of the foreground and include more sky. I would have probably included MORE of the telephone poles and wires on the right to create somethign of interest in the image besides the color. The horizon itself doesn't offer any particularly interesting shapes and contrasts in the image, so these poles could offer that extra 'rural' element that could make this photo stronger in the long run.
Technical:
I don't see anything to comment on here for the technical aspects of the photo. The exposure looks good and the color saturation is fine as well. There is good sharpness and the overall image definition is fine...
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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