More than 31 Flavors
by ndoublej

Comment:
For me, you have "natural" lighting inside the store (behind the clerk), and very yellow lighting in the foregound. The fg is very very busy, with all the small olives, and the colors are muted, which reduces the contrast between the different shades. Also, the clerk's lower lip / face looks strange and he's looking vacantly out of the shot - not at his wares or the camera.

Feed the Lot
by Ammie

Comment:
Obviously a very different perspective, but for me, a bit too much the same, and a bit too much shadow. This is very tone on tone with almost nothing contrasty going on. Might work better in B&W.

Condemned
by IAmEliKatz

Comment:
Great detail on the jacket. For me, the centered composition and busy background (tho nicely blurred) don't help the picture.

Spiraling
by Guruinn

Comment:
OK. Big spiral cages reflected in what looks like a shallow pool. Not enough context to relate to this. Nice contrast & detail. This might work better as a B&W.

Leaves
by jesswerven

Comment:
For me, the colors are too muted. Looks a tad over-processed with just a shade too much detail.

Mt Whitney
by 2mccs

Comment:
I kind-of like the abstractness of this, and don't like it at the same time. I think a complete fill-the-frame with no white jaggies or corners and without the white frame would work better.

IMG_8635aa_filteredr
by rbecker

Comment:
Cute fella, but to me the focus is off / too soft on the face, paw, and around the eyes, especially.

See the light
by Adz

Comment:
Probably me, but a bright, starred light at the top of a long stair doesn't do much for me. I could see a ghostly figure ascending the stairs or something to add interest.

Time Out
by petehall

Comment:
This shot makes me ask, "Why?" Nice contrast, but no apparent reason for the bike parked where it is, or the selective desat of all but orange. Plus, the tires look to clean for it to have been ridden recently. Maybe this is a gift, waiting to be discovered...

Jean Paul Gaultier
by bjoern

Comment:
Something really doesn't work in this photo for me - not sure if it is the people in much darker lighting with the products displayed in very bright lighting, the ghost arms of the sales person, a seeming lack of sharpness, angle of the display table across the shot - not sure any of these are all that bad in themselves, but their combination that seems to bother me.