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| 12/04/2008 06:03:06 PM |
Mystifyby disturbedComment: Compositionally you have the right idea. The technicals need some work. It's overexposed and there's motion blur. Try shooting at dawn or dusk or on an overcast day, and maybe cut out the sky to increase the sense of abstraction. And use a tripod. It might work better in black and white. (Check out my only ribbon for a similar architecture shot.) |
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| 12/04/2008 06:00:36 PM |
Scary Yet Candidby heavyjComment: Oh, he's not too scary. Intersting moment. Maybe too much sign on the left (or not enough, depending on what it says). |
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| 12/04/2008 07:35:27 AM |
Watkins Glen Pool Quadtoneby smichenerComment: You lost a lot when you made this monotone. Quadtone probably wasn't necessary. I think a straight desat, with or without a tone, would have accomplished the same effect.
That said, I think it needs more contrast and some strategic dodge and burn to make it work. It strikes me as kid of flat. The color version has a nice sense of depth and space that is lost here. I think a more careful conversion is needed to bring some of that back.
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