Your Soulmate Awaits At Your Local Yamaha Dealer
by aaronb532

Comment:
Nice. I somehow feel I should be able to read Yamha somehwere on the bike but I don't look at car/motorcycle magazines so perhaps not.

....POOL COVERS YOUR CHILDRENS SAFETY IS EASY AS DOGS PLAY
by Rando D300

Comment:
I'm not sure about the analogy. It's not in common parliance so it's kind of off for me. It's a fun shot of the dog but I shouldn't be seeing the debris on the pool cover which is presumably the product. It really doesn't say 'advertisment' to me. Original entry, though.

On a non-DPC note, I must say it's gratifying to see someone taking this sensible approach to safe pool ownership. In Rhode Island, a local soldier, stationed in Iraq, had to return home last week because his toddler drowned in the family swimming pool. A cover like this would have prevented that tragedy.

It's What's On The Inside That Counts
by C-town driver

Comment:
Interesting. The focus on the processor is a bit fuzzy or perhaps just noisy from compression. I think this is just too busy for an advertisment.

Pure
by labuds

Comment:
Interesting idea and nice composition. The lighting is good, the product is prominent and the message is clear. You've even left room at the right for text. Very nice.

Time Magazine
by victor01

Comment:
This is a decent composition with good use of available light. It really doesn't say 'advertisement' to me, though. I can't see this being an ad for Time magazine. It doesn't say anything about the product.
It says more about the magazine holder.

You and the Cap'n Make It Happen
by marginalwarfare

Comment:
It looks like you may have been sampling some of the product because this is not in focus. I am seeing double and I haven't been drinking anything stronger than coffee.

I suggest a tripod next time.

Sharpen Your Outlook With Accuvue Contact Lens Cleaner
by sandabella

Comment:
Interesting. I can't quite figure out what the metal ring and black stuff is under the lens. Am I missing something?

PC Stress Reduction Kit (Hammer not included)
by Brad

Comment:
Haha. Not bad. The lighting is good (except for the shadow under the hammer and the 'new & improved lettering). I had to tilt my head to read the label on the hammer so I would say that touch was just gilding the lily.

Adidas Roteiro - The Ball of Champions 2004
by robcon

Comment:
The focus is too soft, exposure is too dark, and the black and white rather dull. To achieve good results with black and white takes a bit more than desaturating the image.

reassuringly expensive
by Harryg

Comment:
Very nice. The lighting is a bit blown out at the bottom but they may be intentional. I would like to see a bit less wrinkling on the label but that may have been hard to prevent. Overall, one of the better I've seen so far.