Playtime is _not_ over.
by animes2k

Comment:
Great idea but seems out of focus.

Visit The Hunt Club
by cbeller

Comment:
I imagine most places turn on their lights before it gets completely dark outside. Photographing this just after sunset when there is still some light in the sky and after the sign has been turned on would allow us to really see the club and I think might make for a better club advertisement.

So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment:
Overall a nice idea with the soap suds but they look very over exposed.

Before heading to work, I need my java.
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
Assuming the advertisement it to sell coffee the label of the coffee cup should be prominent and facing forward. Working like a dog is a great idea though.

The choice is yours...
by Pooba

Comment:
The package not being completely parallel to the camera is creating some distortion. You could also brighten up the packaging so it's really eye grabbing. The toilet paper although related seems to send mixed signals. After all if you used the tablets you wouldn't need so much of the TP. Maybe a smiling person walking on the beach or enjoying some activity would make the message more clear.

Ice cold, Stella Artoise
by Pixelstate

Comment:
Needs much more light so you can use a faster shutter and freeze the beer. You might also consider misting the bottle to get some nice drops. Wet sells drinks. A levels adjustment also seems in order.

Liquid Gold
by RUEDISCHMUTZ

Comment:
One click with the set white point tool in the levels dialog of photoshop turned the background of this photo from green to white.

Style... Timeless
by johnm

Comment:
I think the watch is turned a little too much to the side. I don't know how much diffusion you used on your light source but I would recommend more to bring the harsh highlights under control. A different colored background would also be nice. the current one is too close in color to the watch face making for a very monochromatic feeling presentation.

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by jjbeguin

Comment:
Yes, that would be very interesting software.

Freelander
by K-Rob

Comment:
Seems a little soft on the logo.