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So Fresh & So Clean
So Fresh & So Clean
timganier


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Challenge: Advertisement Revisited (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S7000
Location: Down south bathing pond! lol
Date: Jul 6, 2004
Aperture: f8
ISO: 160
Shutter: 1.3
Galleries: Advertisement, Floral
Date Uploaded: Jul 6, 2004

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Place: 98 out of 218
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Votes: 286
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07/13/2004 09:06:13 PM
Too muddled, not enough BRAND focus
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07/13/2004 09:22:42 AM
This fits the nature of soap advertising well, little overexposed on the top of the soap though.
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07/12/2004 02:58:22 PM
Nice! I wish there were more details in the bubbles... right now they are a little blown.
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07/12/2004 02:41:30 PM
Closer crop on the soap would have been nice. What do the flowers and birds have to do with clean?
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07/11/2004 04:07:31 PM
It looks like you set this up in front of your dishwasher or some other big appliance. Not a great choice for a background. I don't understand the choice to show two boxes. The box on the left is just more business in an already busy composition. A single (REAL) flower, the suds, soap, and one box would have been much more effective. The swans and silk flower arrangement are just kind of cheesy looking. After viewing it for awhile, a finally get that the background I'm seeing is the bathroom tile and the lower edge of a mirror. I was seeing the mirror as a chrome handle on an appliance.

Next time, create a still-life on a table against a simple background (matte white paper or poster board) with only the product and one or two other items (like flowers, petals, etc.).
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07/11/2004 01:03:23 AM
Really nice try. The bubbles are a bit over exposed and there are a few shadows. Maybe next time try to difuse the light a little and a little fill flash.
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07/11/2004 12:58:16 AM
Nice, a soap stil life...6
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07/09/2004 11:43:53 AM
What if you'd cropped to the soap, the box and the suds? The extra in the back distracts from your creativity of the product display.
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07/08/2004 11:46:19 PM
Very nice! I can easily see this in a print ad!
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07/08/2004 08:24:31 PM
Well thought out. lighting is superb, Great effort
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07/08/2004 08:20:51 PM
the suds and Lever bar are too close to the same color under this lighting.
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07/07/2004 10:44:25 PM
Charming picture and creates a nice mood for the soap. Um, the upper right appliance (?) lid, is a bit harsh. But overall, quite pleasant.
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07/07/2004 05:03:36 PM
Great shot, the only thing i would change is the soap looks a bit over exposed. Other than that I like it a lot. : )
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07/07/2004 03:33:29 PM
A good idea, the foam around it really brings across the message of a soft soap. However the background needs some more attention. the pink thing on the left, the frame of the mirror don't really add anything. The vase and ducks (?) could still be used but maybe in a more concentrated composition. the foam looks also a bit overexposed, looses detail.
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07/07/2004 11:38:52 AM
I love the product image, but lose the extraneous elements (Silk flowers look really bad here). Get rid of the pink thing on the left and crop to the top of the nearer swan's head or lower.
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07/07/2004 07:30:41 AM
bit of metal upper right detracts from your well composed/lit/sudsy shot.
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07/07/2004 05:45:33 AM
I see what you were trying to accomplish here, but the background is so dull. Fresh flowers would have had a better touch. No ducks.
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07/07/2004 04:19:08 AM
too much light on top of soap bar and bubbles.
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07/07/2004 01:32:30 AM
Overall a nice idea with the soap suds but they look very over exposed.
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07/07/2004 01:11:42 AM
Nice product shot. I think it needs just a tad more contrast, but it still looks good in that soft light.
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