Illuminatis™
by gloda

Comment:
What is this, bottled LSD? Composition is nice, the idea and background are equally bizarre. I think a label of some sort would have cemented the advertisement idea better. This really just comes across as some sort of bizzare bottle abstract. Good luck.

Hello..... Let Me In
by norlitobg

Comment:
Not sure how this works as an ad. 8 cans of the competition and 1 of your won eh? Setting that aside, the Pepsi label should be displayed in full (if you're making a Pepsi ad here). Composition would work better if cropped so there was no whitespace on the left side. DoF is nice though getting ALL the coke blurred out would have been even better. Overall not bad, good luck.

Roughin' It!
by derekmartinig

Comment:
Tough shot, trying to display the bottle while not blowing out the sky. Should have used a refelector of some sort to bounce some light back onto that label because it is just about too dark to read - not a good thing for an advertisement. Idea here is nice, composition is good. Good luck.

Mafia Beer
by secolibar

Comment:
I'm probably the 10th person to leave you this comment, but here it is anyway: the bottle is too dark. Maybe that's the idea or something. Composition here is in dire need of improvement. Also, use Save for Web and submit your image at the max allowed size. The lighting in this shot is actually pretty nice. If the picture were a decent size and you had something like a pocket flash light aimed at the label of the bottle, you'd actually have a decent advertisement looking image here. Good luck.

Bud Light on Tap
by David1411

Comment:
This isn't a bad ad shot. The lighting could be a little moodier, and I think you could have pulled that off in post-processing by playing with levels/curves. One thing about advertisements is they generally show a brand of some sort which you are being convinced to buy. That seems to be missing here. All in all not bad. Good luck.

Jax Beach...
by surfwakeskate

Comment:
Should be a girl in a bikini in this picture. You don't sell beer by showing a mostly empty beach. You sell beer by showing healthy, sexy people frolicking on the beach. Nontheless, this would work a lot better if the beer itself were standing straight up. Perhaps you'd been drinking it before taking the shot, eh? Admit it!

"Is it a longneck ?"
by Tajhad

Comment:
On the one hand, this is a pretty lame ad concept. On the other hand, you've presented it like an ad which is great. The photo is well taken, and I could see this sort of thing being in a magazine with a little work. Nice job, good luck.

After a while, even Keystone Light starts to tast good....
by essie

Comment:
Funny in a college sort of way (anyone drink this swill after college? heheh). Flash lighting is pretty harsh, whole photo is tilted to the right. This defintely doesn't cut it as an advertisement. Good luck.

TUBORG
by Gauti

Comment:
This would have look 100% better without the beer spilling over. Or, while a much tougher shot, getting the foam of the beer as it is just coming down the edge a bit. The mess on the bottom is distracting. Doesn't make me want to grab a beer, makes me want to grab some paper towels. Lighting is nice in how it makes the beer glow gold. Would like to see the white foam on top as well (spot light from above?). Good luck.

Simply Beautiful
by Kandy Kane

Comment:
If anything this is high key, not high contrast. Good luck.