SK Line
by neophyte

Comment:
Hmm, comes across as a strong shoehorn rhythm from someone who happened to be sitting on a bunch of race shots and wanted to get one in the challenge. I could buy into repeating patterns of dismiliar cars with dismiliar colors, shapes, focus, etc but with one car dominating the shot none of the rest really have a chance to add to the rhythm of the scene.

Music Sets Me Free
by dsterner

Comment:
No repeating patterns at all, certainly none that are defining the shot.

Rhythm of Summer
by djofi

Comment:
No real rhythm here, title notwithstanding. Lot of abstract lines in the water, and then a chain which happens to be hanging out there for some reason. Actually if the chain were in better focus, this might have drawn me in. Hard to say, this is not an easy shot to like.

Ferned Out
by jaysonmc

Comment:
Nice patterns, but I don't get an overall sense of rhythm in the shot. Here's some patterns, there's some patterns. What ties this together?

beepbeep mm beepbeep yeah
by skewsme

Comment:
Nice eye. Pity the windows weren't equally horizontally spaced. Still, some crazy people like odd meters. The world can't be all 4/4. Nicely done.

Rhythm & Blues Smash Hit! "She Done Broke My Guitar, My Head, and My Heart"
by JohnLampkin

Comment:
The only strong repeating patterns here are the strings and the frets, both of which come across as being entirely incidental to the shot. The smashed body of the guitar draws the eye and keeps it there, leaving the patterns to beat out a rhythm which goes unheard.

'the birds'
by suemack

Comment:
Don't really see any repeating pattern here. Yes there is more than one bird, but that's not quite the same thing. Setting the challenge aside, I think this would pop a bit more if you cropped off the two blurriest birds on the left and got the feeding dish down on the thirds intersection in the lower left. That might present a pleasing, sweeping arc of the dish and the birds to the right swooping upwards in the frame.

A Beat From Within
by JawnyRico

Comment:
Too defined to be an abstract, not enough definition to really hook me on the patterns being presented here. Overall I like this, but its just not as powerful as I think it could be.

transposed diminuendo
by dougi555

Comment:
I imagine this has some appeal to a fan of very esoteric, minimalist art. I'm not a fan, but I admire your courage for submitting it.

Hello lamp-post! Whatcha knowin'?
by jodis_eva

Comment:
Nice silhouettes which form an interesting pattern. I wish they were more dominant in the frame. Being overwhelmed by the sky, they really lose their impact.