Jump, Fishy, Jump!
by lynnmarie

Comment:
Chuckle.

Under the spot light
by Stagolee

Comment:
So many questions ...
Why is he all wet?
What ARE those spots?
Why does he look sad? bored? tired?

I gotta say, the lighting's kind of dull, but I'm voting a 6 because of the mystery. :)

oil spots
by Federico

Comment:
Interesting abstract.

Black White and pencil
by Peshiks

Comment:
I'm betting I'm not the only one to point out that this is a spots challenge, not striped. Therefore, I can't vote it as high as I would otherwise. That said, I like this composition a lot, and I think it'll be a nice addition to your portfolio.

Yahtzee Spots
by Hoochie

Comment:
Nice composition - good use of the shapes. The lighting's pretty flat, though. The white dice are quite gray, just about matching the gray background for the page. Try enhancing the contrast and see what you think. That should also help get rid of the distracting texture of the background.

Pure white and bright green on absolute black, and this would do much better.

Spotted corpse - twisted and wrapped
by jj94

Comment:
Nice try, but something's missing. That pose just doesn't seem especially corpse-like, esp. with his eyes open. But it's also just not engaging my imagination.

Oscar Spots
by 4trtone

Comment:
Out of focus, but the fish's shape is interesting.

Sandstone and Lava
by puzzled

Comment:
This seems washed out. I wonder whether a high-contrast B&W conversion would put the emphasis more on the interesting shapes.

dry season
by tcmartin

Comment:
Pretty color. However, the very dark subject makes the background seem more important.

That's The Spot
by sfmorris

Comment:
Seems a bit oversharpened, but that might just be the effects of shrinking it. The horse is a little hard to make out - it's almost an abstract. I would try cropping it so the horse is more central to the composition. Right now, the entire upper half isn't relevant to your subject.