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| 04/11/2003 10:11:06 AM |
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| 04/11/2003 10:10:06 AM |
Wildflowersby bobgaitherComment: The yellow on green works here. This is a very good image and the composition couldn't be better, good job! |
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| 04/11/2003 10:09:20 AM |
Ribbon Colorsby JMSComment: Very sharp and detailed. Also an assortment of colors on offer, good one! |
| 04/11/2003 10:07:34 AM |
Temple of Irisby falveyComment: Amazing photo I like it. The yellow breaks the purple color gently but subtly, good! |
| 04/11/2003 10:06:47 AM |
Winter flowersby ursulaComment: Beautiful pastel colors here, somehow this looks like a drawing. You took a great shot, I like it. |
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| 04/11/2003 10:05:15 AM |
Duoby lionelmComment: Excellent colors! The red really stands out on the blue background. Wonderful detail. The shallow DOF works well. |
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| 04/11/2003 09:55:51 AM |
Radial Symmentryby leko2kComment: Critique Club
Hi Mark. A very symmetrical and well thought out image, good idea. The decision to go black and white worked. The DOF is deep, everything fully in focus, the detail is fantastic. What strikes me first when I look at this photo is the amazing contrast. The blacks and whites are so subtle!
The composition is good, the angle works here. I think a straight on shot wouldn't have had as much impact. The only thing I would have changed is the crop. Everything in this photo is so symmetrical except for the crop which you can see on the outer ring of the dartboard. I would have cropped it more evenly.
Gary |
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| 04/11/2003 09:37:07 AM |
Eclipsed Rotational Symmetryby MaYzComment: Critique Club:
Hi Rob. I'm glad I got given this one to critique, I gave it a 9 in the challenge. A very clever idea and very well composed, I liked this one as thumbnail and when I clicked the full image I wasn't disappointed. The colors are amazing, the lighting perfect and the challenge met fully. Rotational symmetry is also symmetry :-)
Not much to criticise here really. There is a little graininess in the image but in my opinion it works here. The black hole is a little off-center but you can't really see it with the eye if you look casually at it. (I used a ruler he he).
A very good image which you can be proud of, 13th place from 228 entries is excellent, and your best score yet, congratulations.
Gary
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| 04/11/2003 09:21:35 AM |
Architectural Harmonyby JeileenComment: Critique Club
Hello Joy. Congratulations on finding such an excellent subject for the symmetry challenge. The composition is very good, especially with the flagpole being exactly in the middle. The reflections are amazing. The green of the hedge breaks the blue/white color harmoniously. Good job!
A couple of things I'd change would be that the whole image seems to be tilted to the left. A slight rotation in the post processing would have fixed this or maybe holding the camera more level when taking the shot would have helped. Also I would have cropped out the sidewalk, it is a little distracting.
I don't think the image is too bright as has been mentioned in the comments below, but maybe the saturation could have been tweaked to bring out the colors more.
All in all this is a fantastic image and you can be proud of it.
Gary |
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| 04/11/2003 09:08:49 AM |
Backyard Infinityby anknerComment: Critique Club:
Congratulations on your first photo submission. Your subject does interpret symmetry, perhaps not in the mirrored symmetry sense, but symmetry is there so the challenge has definitely been met.
Good composition. My eyes are being led into the middle of the photo as the leaves form leading lines. The light at the top of the image is a little distracting, I would have either cropped that out or changed the position of the plant to avoid the glare. The lighting is otherwise good and the green of the plant very subtle.
I like this shot and hope to see more of your submissions in future.
Gary |
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