light
by mrsamsa

Comment:
lacks focus. I do like the idea of the water looking like jets of light. The girl in the background takes away from the photo. Too much negative space on teh right side.

Innercity Heat Relief
by hyperfocal

Comment:
The boy is too red. And I'm not a big fan of huge shadow across his chest.

B/W Portrait (Straight from Camera)
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment:
I like the blue tone...I'm giving you an extra point on this one.

The Swimming Hole
by L1

Comment:
The extra red lines take way from the photo. Because he is swinging into it( and it's right in the center of the photo), your focus is brought to the extra swing. I'm bumping it up 1 point though.

Old Cannon
by FocusPoint

Comment:
The background subject is too blurry. Your foreground subject has great focus but not enough of it is captured to know what it is.

Seagulls Over Grassy Dunes
by james_so

Comment:
I'm assuming you were gonig for more artistic here? Seems like its just a little too busy with no clear idea of what you were aiming for.

Pool Party Plunge
by weisz

Comment:
This photo would have been better if you oculd have gotten a different angle. Maybe one showing her face and/or where she is jumping from. There is too much wasted space in the top of the photo, that could have been used to capture more of the pool. Placing her near the top right corner would have given the photo more effect by showing more of the pool and giving more of a sense of depth.

Riding The Storm Out
by 4forfun

Comment:
Too small to really give much commenting on or to view details of the photo.

The wild child
by ergates

Comment:
The childs face is turned way so that you don't see any facial expressions. But the body is cut off so you don't see hand gestures or body posture. So now I'm left wondering what the purpose of the shot was.

Wild Iris
by xianart

Comment:
Too much blur and takes away from the photo.