Psssst....wanna buy a computer?
by rll07

Comment:
Put a touchpad on that thing, and we can talk. Subect is nicely lit and posed (great expression), but I'd prefer the background a bit farther away and better control of the shadows there. The sweater over the LCD is a bit of a bummer, too. Not to be too critical - it's technically much better work than most of what one usuallly sees here.

Detecting Osteoporosis: How Strong Are Your Bones?
by tjuneau13

Comment:
Looks like a very narrow tonal range. I like the dreamy, abstract look for the background, but the cutaway section could use more crunch (contrast).

Coolest job in the world
by paully2k1

Comment:
Not a great exposure, but you've gotta love the color. That you in there?

Plant or Animal?
by Chaszmyr

Comment:
Nice duotone.

Making more room
by jab119

Comment:
The lighting falls off a little at the top, and the crease there, while adding dimension, is distracting. I'd have moved the pencil and ruler down into the drawing a bit and tightened the composition. Nice work.

Would You Go Diving With Me?
by nds

Comment:
Sure! Nice high key, but needs some more weight in the middle and bottom to balance the top - maybe lipstick (just for effect) or a different RGB conversion. Some sharpening or compression artifacts show in the hair.

everythings a chore
by RottenYouth

Comment:
Nice and sharp, and a good tonal range. IMO, you could have taken a more creative approach to the composition. There's a lot of space on the left that's not contributing to the image.

Merry Christmas from WPIX-TV
by SatelliteSpeck

Comment:
I like the selective focus here, but would like the whole composition slid to the left to show the cables entering the board - where the rubber meets the road, as it were.

Healing Families
by kandyj

Comment:
A very good composition. Shame about the resolution - either an older camera or a rather extreme crop, I guess. Could be improved by moving them farther from the wall to control the shadows from the flash.

Bonfire 2002: Texas Aggies Remember 1999 Collapse
by Froober

Comment:
You can't go wrong with a fire pic for PJ, and I like the silhouettes you've made here. Great catch.