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Swirl
09/25/2006 08:28:11 AM
Swirl
by danderson107

Comment:
stunning. unexpected. well done indeed. 9
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The Boxer
09/25/2006 08:27:52 AM
The Boxer
by Len Scap

Comment:
glass pawn?
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At the Salon
09/25/2006 08:27:08 AM
At the Salon
by judojoe

Comment:
very nice, but i think it would have been a better composition if it was cropped closer. the lines and colours are a little too swirly, almost vertigo inducing. plus, the fact that the centre of the image is out of focus makes it quite hard to look at. 7.
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Into the Abyss
09/25/2006 08:24:48 AM
Into the Abyss
by cools98

Comment:
fascinating. beautiful. i have no idea what it is. will be coming back to figure it out!
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"Those are pearls that were his eyes"
09/25/2006 08:23:59 AM
"Those are pearls that were his eyes"
by sibeling

Comment:
lovely. anyone who quotes shakespeare gets a thumbs up!
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Hanneke
09/24/2006 03:19:12 AM
Hanneke
by Arti-Elvi

Comment:
stunning
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Calla Lily
09/23/2006 02:09:09 PM
Calla Lily
by love

Comment:
superb. composition, focus, exposure, post processing, the lot. i'm only unsure about the pattern on the background surface. it's indistinct enough that i look for the little butterflies and flowers. i think an unpatterned surface would be better.
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A Tree in the Neighborhood
09/23/2006 09:14:28 AM
A Tree in the Neighborhood
by banmorn

Comment:
Critique Club

Hello from the Critique Club. My name is Christian, and I̢۪m a member of the CC. Your picture has been assigned to me to critique. I hope you find this crit helpful; if you have any questions, please PM me.

The first impression is rather bland. At first, the image appears to be more of a snapshot. However, with further inspection, the viewer begins to see more interesting aspects of the image.

The composition is good, sound, yet quiet. The slightly off centre tree trunk works, as do the repetition of vertical and horizontal lines. The fact that there is no lens distortion on the image makes this a very interesting image. The elements are balanced in their imbalance – the window and downspout balance the door and the man. The moulding line echoes the downspout. This is a very sophisticated composition.

The exposure is good, although the light is a bit harsh. The tones are very well shown, and there is good detail in both highlights and shadows; a good tonal range.

I particularly like the square blue windows in the band of square terracotta tiles.

So, what could improve this image? I think the person is just too static, and the image does not draw the viewer in. Sadly, without that initial hook, the viewer does not stay long enough to appreciate the image properly.

What would I do differently? The framing is perfect, and I understand that this is probably a candid. But, if this was shot at a time of day with lower light, and the figure was moving faster (a jogger, running child, roller-blader, cyclistâ€Â¦) the motion blur would provide that spark of interest to hold the viewer, so they can appreciate the whole image.

I hope this has been helpful. If you have any questions about this, please pm me.

Great work, keep shooting!
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eye was framed and gagged
09/23/2006 07:38:12 AM
eye was framed and gagged
by jdannels

Comment:
i like it! how do you get these so well lined up? do you shooot billions, or do you have an assistant?

however, i think if the background colour had slightly less magenta in it, it might work better. and maybe the background slightly smoothed - the texture is a little bit distracting.
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Marsmellow seeds ready for planting
09/22/2006 04:17:43 PM
Marsmellow seeds ready for planting
by Ljon

Comment:
very good. i've often thought of these as giant marshmallows.
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