Silver Rings with Devil Hairline Shaddows
by Someamateur

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club

You've tried to make what is a very dull subject interesting with the use of light. This is good. The shadows do add interest to the image. Three is a good number of objects to include too!

Composition: Not much to say except that it feels a little tight at the top. Was this intentional? Some comments on your photo may help with these critiques.

Technical: The lighting is a bit harsh, especially in the reflections. Again, I can't tell if this is intentional as you have no comments on the image.

Feel: It's not the most exciting topic and you've somewhat added interest but the base topic just that interesting to get the score much higher.

PM me if you have any questions.

Two-Day Olds (No puppy was harmed)
by davidus428

Comment:
Nice shot but that title doesn't sit well

The Petite Sophisticate
by scalvert

Comment:
This jumped out at me from the thumbnail. A very nice shot. I think the lighting is a bit harsh but it seems to work well rather than being a problem.

I have it pegged as either Dr Achoo or scalvert. I'm going to go with this being scalverts shot. If I'm wrong then please take that as a compliment.

oui!
by silverfoxx

Comment:
Well done teammate! Great work indeed.

Empire Sandy
by Strikeslip

Comment:
Congrats man, King of the Red Ribbons!

Careful...
by skasuba

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Firstly, well done on a very creative shot. A great idea that is well executed.

At first glance you pull off this shot as you intended. We see a person standing on a board over a city. When we look a little longer we see two things that spoil the illusion you are trying to create. The first is the shadows under your feet, as many commenters have already pointed out. The second is that a couple of the seems in the paper are visible (theres really only one area near the top left that stands out).

Composition is good with strong lines and the city streets leading to the feet too!

Overall, ok lighting (other than the position that caused the shadows, and that the shoes are not evenly lit), good composition, good colours (or colour in this case), good idea, good exectuion.

PM me if you have any questions.

Rainbow of Eggs
by daisypaige

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

My first impressions on seeing this are that this is a very interesting and colourful shot. It meets the challenge and the ring of eggs draws the eye around and around looking at the details.

I'm a fan of negative space so the vast emptyness in the middle works for me but it won't for everyone, as some commenters said. The coloured border works too, which they often don't.

The lighting does seem a bit harsh, especially on the bottom-left of the circle. The pastel colours are a good choice but DPC voters tend to like bright colours more.

Overall, a good shot with something difference from the usual. The score reflects that and if you had got the lighting a bit softer I think you'd have got closer to a 6.

Good luck in future challenges. Fell free to PM me if you have any questions.

Peek-a-boo
by Marjo

Comment:
Great job on the processing, this is a wonderful shot. If this were mine I'd print it and hang it on the wall!

red matrix
by cutout

Comment:
I really can't see anything about this that shows you are a photographer. It is some nice artwork but anybody can take a photo of someone else's artwork. Try to put something of yourself into your next entry.

Mortarium & Pistillum
by Brookied

Comment:
Nice shot, top 10 material