Passenger Window
by amyr37

Comment:
This uses the mirror to frame a picture not the window

Alice in Wonderland
by Majanka

Comment:
This DNMC .. is incredibly clever and I will be impressed if it is not DQed :)

From Dream to Reality
by rjkstesch

Comment:
This is lovely, but DNMC so I think you may get slammed by the voters ... the window here is not framing anything.

play ball
by weisz

Comment:
I think you will get scored badly for DNMC .. the window is not really framing anything in thsi picture.

Spring Peace
by vtruan

Comment:
This really has to stretch to meet the challenge, as the window is not framing anything .. in fact it is totally out of DOF.

Angel under glass
by lahern

Comment:
This is a lovely picture, but the brightness of the reflections are imposing themselves on your focus point.

Awww......ain't she cute!!
by Judi

Comment:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
It seems they breed them cute in australia ... I thought we had dibs on that here :)

Composition:
Great ... this is a lovely picture .. with a what I think is a great composition ...

Subject:
Really meets the challenge perfectly.

Technical (Colour and light):
Lovely lighting and wonderful colours .. you have maximised the best from this shot.

To grow its vote?:
I really am not sure .. .all the top shots are totally unique shots with there pluses and minusus as is yours.

Summary:
This is wonderful .. you have a great portfolio .. keep it up .. I am impressed ... are you sure you are an aussie :)

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Cheers

Kari

Pigeon Talons Are Sharp and Scary
by wibing

Comment:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
You mean bugger .. why didn't you help her she is obviously in trouble and you stand there taking a picture ... I hope you got a model consent ... LOL

Composition:
This works for this shot ... it is truely a good crop and appreciated by others.

Subject:
meets the challenge with gusto .. but I expect it would being in the top 10

Technical (Colour and light):
I love naural light .. can't say it enough in this challenge.

To grow its vote?:
Yeah right .. its top 10 .. I have no ideas!

Summary:
Good shot for a second entry ... keep it up I expect you to ribbon soon!

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Cheers

Kari

Easter Pageant Rehersal
by tuffy

Comment:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Doesn't really appear candid and it got stung for score because of this ...from reading this is not how it is meant to appear .. but its one of those annoying 'shit happens" moments. :(

Composition:
This is not bad .. its doesn't grab me though .. i am not sure why not.

Subject:
well as mentioned and as pointed out by others ... they felt it DNMC .. who cares it is a great stock shot for the portfolio.

Technical (Colour and light):
On first look I thought it was a little washed out .. on second was fine .. I like natural light for taking pics ... which is lovely.

To grow its vote?:
as above .. meeting the challenge in the eyes of the voters helps.

Summary:
Good shot, but as you say .. onwards and upwards.

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Cheers

Kari

Three Brothers
by davidus428

Comment:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
great colours ... impressive that you got the stop motion with the waves and drips.

Composition:
Not to have cropped this is great, but am unsure how you ended up with those dimensions without cropping.

Subject:
Meets the challenge ... and does so well.

Technical (Colour and light):
maybe a little over-saturated ... now if only you could get them to stay perfectly still .. no that wouldn't be candid :)

To grow its vote?:
Top 20 I wouldn't complain.

Summary:
Good shot ... lovely image and great capture.

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Cheers

Kari