Hell
by alfresco

Comment:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Wow ... hmmmm .. ok nice body.

Composition:
I think this suits this shot. I feel personally it is really centred .. and I am not a fan of this .. but for this shot it seems to work well. You have good position of the face .. and the lighting seems to work showing good body definition.

Subject:
meets the challenge ... and does so in a huge way.

Technical (Colour and light):
ok .. hard to say really .. its red .. got to be red .. .and shows read. ... it is really sharp .. and still red. you can see the water spots on the stomach ...

To grow its vote?:
I really don't know .. I took a look at the others .. and they seemed a little more 'real' to me .. if you know what i mean ... picking a theroretical place could be a minor issue .. but you depicted it well.

Summary:
Great shot .. well done.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Yellow SubMarine
by Lionsitaly

Comment:
Interesting concept ... it may be a little close to the background ...

And we lived beneath the waves ...
by armin

Comment:
Love it ... great image .. and so submarineish :)

TWIST & SHOUT
by -Bec-

Comment:
she is gorgeous ... and not only that she is co-ordinated.

Eleanore Rigby- 'Waits at the window, wearing the face that she keeps in a jar by the door.'
by micromidge218

Comment:
Interesting picture .. is the amount of grain intentional?

Lucy in the Sky
by Skip

Comment:
great choice and good oncept .. I think there are some sharpening artifacts .. but am not 100% as not using my own computer.

Tomorrow Never Knows
by swamlove

Comment:
interesting concept ... just a little soft on the focus.

Light of Elegance
by bharathmc

Comment:
This picture is way to small to really see or create an impact.

Did you say walkies?
by joynim

Comment:
Absolutely love the catch light :)

Jalapeno Heat
by Qart

Comment:
Congrats .. well done on the fantastic shot.