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| 01/10/2008 12:57:32 AM |
gentle touchby jmritzComment: Not being able to see the head is definitely a turn off but I also don't like how you composed the shot. The tree is such a strong element in the composition when it shouldn't be. For me it needs to be more off center. |
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| 01/10/2008 12:53:55 AM |
redby jmritzComment: Very nice shot. You should definitely listen to your daughter more! |
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| 01/10/2008 12:48:22 AM |
Crashby JRalstonComment: Originally posted by Rgarcia: The magnificense of this shot is located in the upper left quadrant, the rest of the image doesn't add anything to it. A crop concentrating on the breaking waves would have scored better IMHO. |
I agree. The composition isn't strong here. I do like that the break of the waves is in a good spot as far as rule of thirds are concern. However, you have too many horizontal lines that break up the flow so to speak. The lack of color doesn't help either. I think if you are going to convert to b/w or desaturate, the composition and or the light has to be really good to compensate for the lack of color.
That all said, if you had some other element in the shot that gave the wave scale or there was some other interesting juxtaposition, the faults in the photo may actually turn into assets or at the very least become irrelevant. |
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| 01/09/2008 02:23:14 AM |
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| 01/09/2008 01:48:48 AM |
Jumping At Youby BHusemanComment: Looks like multiple actions to me and that jumping out of the frame I wonder about, but rules aside this came out great. |
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| 01/09/2008 12:10:50 AM |
Raging Inferno by L2Comment: Congrats Laurie. I bet burning down that building was worth it. :P |
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| 01/09/2008 12:05:08 AM |
Passionby h2Comment: You like collecting these 7 but no ribbon entries. Since you are also into 7 and not even an honorable mention maybe this will interest you. :P
ETA: Strange I can't post it as an image only as a thumbnail. Message edited by author 2008-01-09 00:09:26. |
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| 01/08/2008 02:52:07 AM |
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| 01/07/2008 11:30:22 PM |
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