Valerie
by love

Comment:
Her posture is definitively not flattering. Another point - if you wanted a softer image, then you should have focused in front of her, not behind her. This way your backdrop shows all imperfections instead of being even more blurry than her face.
Good attempt though.

Troll Life
by BrianR

Comment:
where is their computer with dpc account?
Nice texture, the middle two almost look 2-d (in the same plane as the background wall.) Like the effect... 8

Break'em
by cliffj

Comment:
I think I would have liked it better if your perspective was different - from a higher position so that the background clutter isn't there.

Weeeeee ...
by samanwar

Comment:
Nice perspective makes it different from other park snapshots. This extra effort will probably make a whole point difference in the final standings. More dynamic range would have helped - there are no significant dark areas on the photo and that makes it duller than it had to be.

Hey!! What happened to ladies first ??
by dolphnz8

Comment:
I would have preferred to see more faces. Moreover, the black&white is kind of dull in this photo. It seems that the 50% of the photo is within +/- 5% of the same shade of gray. You could have played more with different color channels and selectively (color-wise) shift hues and brightness to achieve more dynamic photo.

Drip
by pointandshoot

Comment:
The drop is too secondary to this composition and lighting. If you put more light on the drop instead of on the spout, it would have been better IMO.

Eyes by librodo
by chsmith

Comment:
The eyes do not stand out - the left one is in the (rather harsh) shade and he whites could have been dodged a bit to increase the effect. Otherwise nice expression on the model.

Nightbulb II ... scalvert
by shanksware

Comment:
exceptional lighting! well done!

Tribute to KarenNfld
by Di

Comment:
The Crop... you should have cropped another 10-20 pixels from the left, to achieve symmetry. This way it looks like the whole photo is leaning to the right even though it may not be.
Now, I lined it up against another window and it IS leaning to the right a bit.
I am not a straight horizon nazi, but it spoils this photo. 5.

It's a Wacky World!
by alienhelix

Comment:
I would expect someone or something with footprints like this to finish elsewhere:-) but an egg is just fine.
Great humorous shot!