Ponderous
by dagills22191

Comment:
A very classic pose on the desk, well done. Now for the nitpicking, the hair across her forehead is very distracting and adds nothing to the shot for me. Covering her hands like that is a big no=no in studio photography. Also the lighting seems just a bit harsh, just a tad more shading, looks like natural light? And a slightly tighter crop on the left, taking the shirt out of the picture, it also ends up being a bit of a distraction, taking away from the girl's beautiful face. A 5

My Love
by Thousands_Fall

Comment:
And a beautiful young lady she is. I realize you were probably going for a soft focus here but it came out more blurred to me than a soft effect and the hair in her face is really a bit of distraction. Did she just come out of the shower, hence the wet, tousled look? It's a classic pose and well done, just needs a bit more focus and a bit more light, it comes across a bit dull on that aspect. A 5

got twins?
by soniecat

Comment:
How adorable are they? Very cute and nice capture, hard to catch them both looking I bet!

The lighting seems a tad bright overall and the focus seems a bit too soft. I had this at a 5 but am bumping to a 7

Portrait Double
by Coley

Comment:
Is it a mirror or water? Interesting take on the challenge and a classic profile shot. But the starkness of the blackness surrounding the face works against this shot for me. Too much negative space for such a classic profile. A 5

Harrison
by Frank Beckman

Comment:
Harrison is a doll and very alert! I love baby pictures. This is a great capture but the focus is off and his eyes seem a bit blurry as a result. Trying to get them sit still when they are awake is a challenge in itself. A 5

Worried...
by kevrobertson

Comment:
Yes, he does look very worried. I wonder if this is a candid moment caught or posed? Very well done overall but the light seems a bit harsh, the shadow on his nose is a bit distracting and his lips look off for some reason, the color doesn't look quite right, almost too pink. The crop is well done though I would have liked to seen the whole chin to balance it out a bit more. A 5

Veronique
by sahko

Comment:
This is a beautiful young lady and the studio set up is very well done. I like the pose but what bothers me is that her feet look enourmous! If you had her sitting in a more traditional pose or maybe moved her feet back? Or even cropped her legs out completely? As it is I give it a 5, if the feet were more proportioned I would give this an 8 or above

A Penny For Your Thoughts
by BooZon

Comment:
A nice shot but a classic error made. If you worked for a portrait studio you would have gotten in trouble for the finger covering the mouth. The pose is good, just need to brign the hand down so the mouth isn't covered. Also the lighting seems just a bit dull overall. I do like the intense expression in his eyes though. Nice capture. Started at a 5, moving to a 6

Contemplation
by waterlilies

Comment:
A nice shot but seems a bit tilted to the right, not sure why. Maybe if you had come at her more head on instead of from the angle you did? I like the backdrop, nice contrast to her white shirt and jeans but the lighting seems a bit dull overall. Too muted, leaving the shot looking dull overall. A 5

Pleasant thoughts
by awpollard

Comment:
This is a classic pose and her expression is almost perfect. Her chin is tilted just a bit high, could bring it down just a bi so we aren't looking up her nose so much ;)t. Also the lighting seems rather flat, leaving her skin with a dull look. And it looks like there is purple on her hair or neck on the left? Not sure where that came from. A 5