In the begining
by Kivet

Comment:
Anything this is, it's quite out of focus. The shades are nice but the subject seems a bit conceptless. The subject you choose could be implemented with smoke lightened with blue, it's easier to get a sharp shot by manual focus or by focusing to a solid object first, which is removed for the shot.

Take a look inside...
by mycelium

Comment:
I have been always trying around to shoot glass sharp, I think I will take lessons from you. :-) Great, clear shot with composition and lighting spot on, the subject is also interesting and I like the indigo shade blues very much. I am really curoius what this is and how it was done. Good luck!

Moments
by srugolo

Comment:
Use of negative spaces is one of my favourite techniques and it works very well here. Expressive shot, and I feel romance between them, it's right on their faces. B and W is a great choice. Good luck!

I love you !
by Anastasia

Comment:
I love the honest expression on her face, which reminds me to a mood of "tears of happiness", cheering up after a quarrel, which is a really great feeling. The writing on her hand reminds me to those days when I rote boys' names in the corners of my books, or also on my hand, because I thought it would bring me luck with the guy. Good luck!

Three Times A Day
by GolferDDS

Comment:
Funny one. :-) Sweet idea, I also like the backfround blown out and the composition. I didn't know tootbrushing was such an erotic activity, I will do it more often. :-)

Romancing the Palate
by CzechMan

Comment:
I like the idea here, it's very nice. though, focus seems to be unclear and the background spoils the idea. There are too many reflections on the chocolate, and the plate is greyish instead of white. Keep the strawberry with the heart shaped choc inside, the green leaves, and put it on a single white backfround. Lighting could be improved, too, reflecting objects are more difficult to lighten well. I would take a non-reflecting white cardboard instead with lots of diffused lights to get clear colours, a sharp subject and a homogenic, neutral background. (4)

Love Blossoms
by iluvcocacola

Comment:
Why did you upload it so small? This could have been a nice snapshot, but overexposed on the whites, due to the flash, I guess. The background is distracting, too. When taking wedding shots, one of the most important technical issues is to have a correct exposure for whites. Therefore, lighting is very important.

Walking home alone in the rain.
by theMilkMan

Comment:
I don't really see the concept of the tilting here, neither the dizzy style. Sometimes it works but here it's too much IMO, and also overexposed. I can't really catch romance, it would be better to see your model's expression on the face, and using a tripod would also help you hold your camera stable.

My Heart
by littlegett

Comment:
A bit out of focus, the composition seems to be conceptless. A heart-shaped stone would work better here, because the photo has to live without the title, too.

peekalovesbijou
by alportland

Comment:
Too small shot, sorry. And the way the small dog was flashed on the eye... Don't use direct flash for animal photos, it hurts their eyes.