Cherry chopsticks
by booboo_goon

Comment:
Well, the model certainly looks glamourous, but somehow the image isn't "all there" as a package. The focus and lighting are pretty good. I guess the thing that throws me off is how exactly are you trying to work the cherries into the "glam" image??? I see just the tips of her fingers and part of the left cherry is cut off; both of which is distracting from the glam concept. I'm thinking maybe you could have included more of her hand and all of the cherries. Also, the cherry is "just" against her lip. Maybe a more "seductive" (adding to the glam concept) way to incorporate the cherries (or maybe just one cherry would have been better) was to have the model pucker her lips against the cherry? The photo just seems to be missing something... But what do I know, its just my honest thoughts about the image...

Looking at it some more, I do like the way you posed the model to look off to her side. It gives the impression that the viewer was just "caught" looking at the subject; which is a nice technique.

Amanda
by shanksware

Comment:
I think the way you composed the model and cropped/framed the image is fine. The lighting is good, but maybe a touch harsh. Focus is right on; her eyes are captivating. The negative aspect is the shelf(?) in the background. It unnecessarily draws away from the model, which is a great glam shot. Just my honest critique.

10.52 No pictures!
by Melethia

Comment:
Hey, I don't like my picture taken either... But (I can only speak of the United States
I'm making an assumption here, but I seriously doubt if the guy had "cultural" worries about Fetor capturing his spirit/soul....

Drive on Fetor and Melethia, get some more great street scenes...

Waiting Boats
by Leo

Comment:
Thanks tph1.
I'll post some details above in the photogs comments.

Bikes 8023
by Melethia

Comment:
I have to say that you have some nice urban/street images. I like your recent bikes images. Nice portfolio.

whatever left me in this world
by posthumous

Comment:

Originally posted by pointandshoot: Teafrans' comment seems somehow familiar.

LOL. I thought it was just me..

Dark Knight
by project365

Comment:
Composition is good, focus is good. Cool shot.

"The Darkness Within"
by jomerner

Comment:
On the technical side, I think something happened in your PP with the contrast. The black of the background looks "muddied." On the positive side, you subject/concept is good.

Inyanga
by MAK

Comment:
Nice lighting. It draws the viewer into her eyes and mouth. Well done.

The Shadows Close In
by MsAmbrosia

Comment:
I really like this. I like how the ship is in the middle if the moon reflected water. However you PP'd this, nice job.