Jungle Gym
by LKMote

Comment:
I think I see what you are trying to do with this shot, but it's not horribly interesting of a composition overall. Your lines are kinda confusing. My eye has no where to rest. The time of day was not the optimal for this shot. The harshness of the light makes shadows that do not add to the composition. The shot is also crooked. Not enough to be artsy, but enough to be distracting.
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Direction
by caba

Comment:
Nice capture. Two things bother me about it though. It looks to be quite soft. I'm a fan of soft focus shot in general, but I don't see where it adds to this composition. The foreground is also quite dark and I find this to be a tad bit distracting here. When I cyber crop this into a square by scrolling up a bit, the composition is much stronger. Oops, I guess that was three things.
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Spanning the Bay
by rayg544

Comment:
This shot has a very classic feel to it. Nice simple tonality! What bride is this? Golden Gate? If so it's unusual to see it done in B/W.
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Bridge
by Mona

Comment:
Pretty scene! I'm trying to decide if I like the shadowlines running right down the middle of the shot. It's definately different. Is this a location you can reshoot? If so, try putting the camera at more unusual levels like down lower. I know it's hard on the knees, but you can get different feelings from the shot by doing so.
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The Wild Sea
by babylon

Comment:
Very nicely done! You have leading lines that are very subtle and work on the mind in a very unconscious way. This is what I believe is much more effective usage of the compositional style that is called leading lines.
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Oh yeah, great misty tonality. My only small complaint is that the ground is so much darker than the rest of the shot and kinda unballances the overall cold feeling...

Treasure Hunters
by Cutter

Comment:
Interesting composition! I would love to see the original though. Your treatment here looks very unnatural. Your sky doesn't match the lighting of the rest of the image and I don't recall ever seeing a pickled beet red sky before...
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Take Off
by karmat

Comment:
According to the arrows, he's goin' the wrong way! :-P How did you turn this B/W? Your tonal range is kinda flat and needs contrast. Nice overall composition though!
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Property Line
by The Eskimo

Comment:
This is a good example of leading lines attempting to be the subject, but something here seems lacking to me. I think it's what Ansel Adams would call your 'bald headed sky'. A more dramatic (spelled cloudy) sky would make this a much better shot. Do I see a reshoot in the future?
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Let's fly a Kite
by Xilebo

Comment:
Cute shot! I bet your getting comments about only having one leading line... Wonder if people are counting the tail of the kite? :-P
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Lines Leading Nowhere
by GeneralE

Comment:
And lines leading no where fit in a leading lines challenge by...
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