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07/03/2005 11:15:20 PM |
This setting has a lot of potential, and in my opinion, had it been composed slightly different would have been a much stronger image. Be careful about not placing the main subject dead center.
Title is a bit weak, possibly something a little less obvious like Shadow Run or similar.
I don't place any weight in a vote on the title, just wanted to make a suggestion. |
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07/02/2005 11:38:38 PM |
Pretty scene! I'm trying to decide if I like the shadowlines running right down the middle of the shot. It's definately different. Is this a location you can reshoot? If so, try putting the camera at more unusual levels like down lower. I know it's hard on the knees, but you can get different feelings from the shot by doing so.
TC |
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07/02/2005 12:51:59 PM |
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07/02/2005 10:05:14 AM |
I like the way that you've captured this with the shadows of the handrails falling onto the platform. You must have waited for just the right time. |
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06/30/2005 01:20:17 AM |
Great focus and exposure, well done considering the bright sunny light, it would be easy to get blown out. A nice pleasing scene. Fits the challenge IMO. ...But, let me preface this next statement by saying, believe me, I am not one of the detail, nitpicky people that over analyze the challenge descriptions and say that the lines have to 'lead' to a pronounced subject. I think the bridge here is the subject and the lines of it lead me nicely through the photo, like I said, it fits the challenge IMO, but as I sit here looking at this image, I hear a little voice screaming that if there were a person somewhere along that bridge, maybe looking out at the water, this could be a much stronger photo. I'm certainly not giving a 'low' vote here, but to me, in this case, that could make for a 'great' photo. |
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06/29/2005 07:44:45 PM |
wow - double leading lines - without the wonderful shadows this might be a boring shot but those somewhat undecided shadows seem to agrue with the unstraight railings to convince my eyes to travel accorss the brigde. nice. |
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06/29/2005 11:46:08 AM |
great entry for this challenge |
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06/27/2005 11:57:15 PM |
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06/27/2005 04:18:27 PM |
Very nicely done. The composition is great and the colors are fantastic. I really like how the shadows line the walkway perfectly. One of my favorites for this challenge. 10 |
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06/27/2005 12:57:04 PM |
nice idea with the shadows adding extra leading. something looks odd though with the slats in the shadow on the left. ohhhh, breaks in the slats, cloning takes patience grasshopper. i think you could have left the space, it would have broken the monotony of the lines. unfortunately the pic doesn't have much pop for me. perhaps a conversion to b/w would help your cause, as you do have some nice tones. |
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06/27/2005 04:14:43 AM |
Nice and bright, with the greenery at the end, optimistic as well, like it lots.. |
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