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Meditation in the City
05/17/2005 08:49:55 AM
Meditation in the City
by amber

Comment:
Sorry, but I think that the ferns really take away from the integrity of the main subject's shape here. 3
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my little corner
05/17/2005 08:49:02 AM
my little corner
by buzzmom

Comment:
While this is a nice scene, there's very little to grab my attention. It might have worked better if there'd been a pipe-smoking granddad reading a paper on the chair. That also might have helped avoid the glare. 3
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Serenity at Sunset
05/17/2005 08:45:25 AM
Serenity at Sunset
by autool

Comment:
There's still too much detail in the face for a true silhouette. This, for me, is a touch frustrating as I can see a much better and much more appealing photo here if you lighten the face a lot. I suspect that you tried to force the challenge theme here. A potentially very, very nice photo for a different time. 4
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Our Need To Communicate
05/17/2005 08:41:53 AM
Our Need To Communicate
by Steveinnz

Comment:
What a delightfully messy work. I'd cut off the bottom 1/5th, though for a tighter effect. I've been having my own troubles with electricity lines, so I'm happy to see them work so well in a photo. 7
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Rythm And Bass Is The Combination To  Harmony
05/17/2005 08:40:36 AM
Rythm And Bass Is The Combination To Harmony
by tolovemoon

Comment:
Besides not being a true silhouette, there's a fuzzy feeling here detracting from what should be a sharpness in the instruments' lines. About the title: try to avoid prepositions. Rhythm and Bass: Harmony's Combination might be more punchier. 3
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Practice, Patience, Perserverance
05/17/2005 08:36:32 AM
Practice, Patience, Perserverance
by Neuferland

Comment:
The double border isn't to my taste, and I feel that the black part is too thick. The action and composition are fine, and I like the colours in the bottom section. 5
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The Incredible Adventures of Joe Bender - Part I
05/17/2005 08:33:36 AM
The Incredible Adventures of Joe Bender - Part I
by conglett

Comment:
I really like the top 80% of this image. It's so surrealistic that I laughed. Unfortunately, when I got to the bottom, the realness of the brick showed through and took away the effect. 5
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Imaginary creature
05/17/2005 08:32:05 AM
Imaginary creature
by AnnaP

Comment:
For my tastes, there's too much negative space here. I'd try a landscape format cropping just below the chin and just to the left of the horn. Or maybe you could have placed the sun directly behind the head giving a halo effect to emphasise the mythical quality. 4
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The ride
05/17/2005 08:29:45 AM
The ride
by ergo

Comment:
I'm not fond of the white border for this grey-toned image. It detracts from the point somewhat. Also, the feet area blends too much with the sand. Otherwise, a nice set up. 5
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The Walker
05/17/2005 08:28:45 AM
The Walker
by justinbrook

Comment:
I like the off-centre composition and the choice of action. Very fitting. You've managed a very clear separation of the figure from the clouds through an effective use of dof. Also, the rule of thirds is textbook. Good stuff. 8
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