In the land of dreams
by pellemannen

Comment:
Interesting idea, but looks OOF rather than soft-focus or abstract.

Main and Davis Streets at 4:43
by livitup

Comment:
This photo makes me feel dizzy... the building on the left is about to topple over.

Macro that needs work
by Dirtypainter

Comment:
Huh? I don't get this title. Are you saying the photo is not good? Why did you submit it then? Bad noise in this shot, you should try not to shoot at this ISO. Very uninspired composition. Why did you take this shot? What are you trying to communicate with it?

Too Early
by tonyv

Comment:
Water seems OOF. I'm sure you could have made more of the silhouetted background, either by zooming out or in. At the moment, I don't feel that the composition makes the most of them. Some PS work with curves could really bring out the colours in this shot.

Proof by Analog Clock (how often do you see that?)
by lindes

Comment:
Nice clock, but you need to develop your photographic eye. Did you think about the texture on the wall? The shadow cast by your light source? The glare caused by the light source? All these things take away from this shot. But the main question is why would we want to look at a centered composition of a clock?What story does it tell? 'Look Ma, I met the challenge' is just not enough! Photography like this is perhaps good enough if you want to sell something on Ebay. If you want to be a photographer, look at textures, colours, composition, emotions. Tell us a story! Draw us in. Show us life.

Anything for DPC
by roby21112

Comment:
The hand with water could be much clearer, it took me a while to spot what was going on in this photo. Nice light, although I think the white balance is a little off.

Ragged December Moon
by Dr.Confuser

Comment:
Doesn't seem quite sharp enough. Although moon shots can be fun, I've seen so many that you need something unusual or different to stand out if you enter them into a competition. The composition here really doesn't say anything new to me.

Awaiting Her Next Feeding
by Shan2112

Comment:
Without the title, this wouldn't tell much of a story to me. I think the bottles need more context. Shallow dof doesn't look deliberate enough to me. Why have you focused on the middle one? Although the subject may be meaningful to you, visually it looks dull and uninspired... I don't think you've really SEEN what you're taking a photo of here other than bottles for your baby. What do they really LOOK like?

Transfiguration at 04:39 AM
by banmorn

Comment:
I can see someone on the ground, but other than that I'm really not sure what I'm looking at here. The photo needs to tell more of a clear story IMO.

Breakfast of Champions
by jpeters

Comment:
Nice idea, not sure about his placement in the frame. I think if his eyes obeyed rule of thirds this could have been more effective. Shame his torso is overexposed. Background is too bright, it takes attention away from the subject.