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| 11/30/2009 02:59:01 PM | Loch Ness Monster? by ikopanasComment: A quiet, static scape with good complimenting colours. As it is, an empty blue sky consumes nearly half of the image; gradating it along with the foreground water, as you did, has improved the givens considerably.
Still, the horizon lies too close to the horizontal centre for a dynamic composition, especially since the (opposite) shore drops it even lower. As others have observed, the frontmost shrub has more attention than an incidental obstruction should have, attention the small tufts of sedge in the water critically need.
I think the inclusion of an interesting foreground object is critical for such an expansive, cloudless setting. There is no bird either, no moon to extend the view beyond the horizon and back, in the form of a reflection, onto the water.
For these reasons, I much prefer your outtake, the higher horizon, even the subdued colours and contrast , which render the light less harsh and leave us a moodier maritime scene.
The symbolism of mountain-fish swallowing another is, IMO, delicately reserved for those who find enough pleasure here to linger for a while. Message edited by author 2009-12-01 11:40:31. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 11/30/2009 02:58:28 PM | SSOC_0826-Edit2.jpgby ikopanasComment: A quiet, static scape with good complimenting colours. As it is, an empty blue sky consumes nearly half of the image; gradating it along with the foreground water, as you did, has improved the givens considerably.
Still, the horizon lies too close to the horizontal centre for a dynamic composition, especially since the (opposite) shore drops it even lower. As others have observed, the frontmost shrub has more attention than an incidental obstruction should have, attention the small tufts of sedge in the water critically need.
I think the inclusion of an interesting foreground object is critical for such an expansive, cloudless setting. There is no bird either, no moon to extend the view beyond the horizon and back, in the form of a reflection, onto the water.
For these reasons, I much prefer your outtake, the higher horizon, even the subdued colours and contrast , which render the light less harsh and leave us a moodier maritime scene.
The symbolism of one mountain-fish swallowing another is, IMO, delicately reserved to those who find enough pleasure here to linger for a while. Message edited by author 2009-11-30 16:18:58. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 11/10/2009 06:25:44 PM | | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/15/2009 01:10:16 PM | fisher catby DeniseComment: I'd i.d. this as a marten. The fisher, or what we'd call a fisher in Canada, should be larger with a bushier coat and tail and more nocturnal than its cousins in the weasel family. American or eastern usage of the terms may vary though. Message edited by author 2009-10-15 13:13:38. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/20/2009 09:01:11 PM | watchdogby tnunComment: As I mistook the (apparent) jeep door trim for a double-barrelled shotgun, the bag-toting middle-aged female about to be obscured in a step or two had my undue attention. The photographer's comment completely ruined the illusion, the high drama and the intrigue. :-/
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| 09/06/2009 11:54:03 PM | by nixterComment: Pipe Dream
Not sans vertigo,
in a spirit of inquiry,
we are gathered here in trinity
to consider the duplicity
of life without trousers. Message edited by author 2009-09-07 00:29:24. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/09/2009 12:03:31 PM | wmbw.jpgby IraklisComment: Whatever it is, this place, the three mills, the walled-in adobes, it should be good for a few hundred "rolls", at dawn, noon, dusk, in wind weather, with and without, her, the gulls or that stray dog. What and where the hell is this? | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 08/08/2009 11:57:39 AM | Dorothy the Wizardby posthumousComment: Well, boaters shouldn't wear high heels on deck, unless prepared to have their feet cut off the ankles. Great headless fun! The gloved hand 'gainst the black, too, should be more becoming a wizard than a face like Sue's or Anneke's. One of my favourites in the challege as well. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 07/20/2009 07:18:33 PM | | Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 07/11/2009 04:46:06 PM | Hey Jewby OdedComment: As some of the comments seem to indicate, the low scores likely came from voters who found the photo unsettling. It's ironic that what amounts to the very gist and pith of an emotionally charged image often also inspires fears. When this happens, an attempt to diminish it by scoring it low, should probably be interpreted as a desire to diminish the fear it conjured in those afflicted. | Photographer found comment helpful. |
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