Not At All
by GP

Comment:
** Critique Club **
by cpanaioti

The curve of the metal is what catches the eye first, however the line of the curve leads the viewer out of the image. The exposure seems a little over done with the extremities of the curve blown out.

Diagonal lines can add tension and interest to an image however in this image they are fairly static since they are over powered by the bright metal.

Cropping to adjust the composition may have helped with the appeal of this image.

Keep shooting.

(remember photography is subjective and these are only my opinions)

Colette

Separate Reality
by flip89

Comment:
I love warped reflections like this. There are a few bright spots that are a bit distracting, however the overall composition is well done and the exposure seems right. 7

The Missing Link
by brownt

Comment:
You've captured the texture quite well, however the lighting seems a little flat. 6

Take Another Look ... N O W What Do You See????
by Jeileen

Comment:
The orientation seems wrong. It may have more impact in landscape mode. 5

Knot
by SMW409

Comment:
Lovely textture and colour, however the knot seems a little too close to the center and the focus seems a little soft. 6

edit: spelling

Message edited by author 2004-05-10 08:16:10.

Flight
by goinskiing

Comment:
Good use of DOF. Nice and sharp . Lines lead the viewer right into the image, however the lighting seems a little flat. 6

Abstract Found
by amsmyth

Comment:
The cut wood has some nice texture. Move in, zoom in, take advantage of it. The trees in the background are distracting. 4

Freedom
by leaf

Comment:
The colours here strike me and the diagonal line adds some drama, however the image as a whole does not work for me. Maybe without the plastic bag... Just a thought. 6

Tulip
by Neil

Comment:
Wispy and well balanced. Reminds me of a silk scarf.

two colors or perhaps more
by eirasi

Comment:
Colour and exposure are good, however the composition seems a little out of balance. This could be that the transition line between the grey and red is a bit too close to center.

The texture on the left with the specs of orange is wonderful. An image with just this part of the image may have worked better. 5