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sarrobiComment: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
I like it! Very nice detail.
Composition:
Not as strong as it could be. Having the raspberry near dead-center isn't exactly a strong composition. Having it off to one side of the photo would have been much stronger.
Subject:
Clear, crisp .. good
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Focus: Perfect. Very sharp.
Colour: Also, perfect.
Light: Once again, perfect.
To grow its vote?:
More than likely, a stronger composition would have gained a few points for you. Also, this was a fairly tough challenge and you scored admirably in it.
Summary:
Good job on this entry, you scored well with a well executed shot.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy