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02/10/2006 08:30:56 PM |
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01/23/2006 07:53:08 PM |
| I LOVE this photo. Thanks so much for shooting it, I want more.... |
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01/23/2006 12:32:28 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
I like it! Very nice detail.
Composition:
Not as strong as it could be. Having the raspberry near dead-center isn't exactly a strong composition. Having it off to one side of the photo would have been much stronger.
Subject:
Clear, crisp .. good
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Focus: Perfect. Very sharp.
Colour: Also, perfect.
Light: Once again, perfect.
To grow its vote?:
More than likely, a stronger composition would have gained a few points for you. Also, this was a fairly tough challenge and you scored admirably in it.
Summary:
Good job on this entry, you scored well with a well executed shot.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/17/2006 09:26:42 PM |
| A hint of sensuality with killer backlighting! Bumping up. |
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01/17/2006 05:38:53 PM |
| Quite appealing! Your border is a great accent. |
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01/15/2006 07:51:01 PM |
| Lovely. Provokes many analogies. Ten |
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01/14/2006 09:26:38 PM |
| Do I recognize that border!? Great shot! |
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01/14/2006 06:08:50 PM |
| Awesome shot. The rim lighting really sets the red of the raspberry apart from the background. Just enought light behind the berry to emphasize the color and translucence. Makes me want to eat it! ;o) |
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01/14/2006 12:04:04 PM |
| Very nice, Love the way this is lit up and the edges glow, Nice detail and the red border seems to tie it together well. |
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01/14/2006 10:31:27 AM |
| I like the border, it frames the image well and because it matches the raspberry it add cohesion to the photo which I find(the photo) engaging.. |
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01/13/2006 10:22:52 PM |
| One very delicious berry, on top of a sugar hill, with delicate back-lighting, which gives the image its impact..... |
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01/13/2006 07:52:42 PM |
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01/13/2006 05:26:24 PM |
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01/13/2006 03:59:49 PM |
| I really like the contrast of colors here with the background and the white and the red. Well done, good luck. |
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01/13/2006 09:04:15 AM |
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01/12/2006 08:58:30 PM |
| wow. The white of the sugar continues in the halo of light around the raspberry - lovely! Great detail, focus, color. I love it! |
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01/12/2006 03:57:02 PM |
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01/12/2006 02:04:45 AM |
Some of us feel fruit is delicious enough without the addition of superfluous sweetening. :)
(Lovely photo) |
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01/11/2006 10:07:12 PM |
| Looks good enough to eat. :) Nicely done. |
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01/11/2006 08:32:10 PM |
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01/11/2006 07:15:11 PM |
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01/11/2006 01:34:57 PM |
| This is interesting. I like the border. Not crazy about the pile of sugar. What if you had it stuc in a 4 tined fork, or on the end of a wide butcher knife instead... hmmm... just thinking out loud. |
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01/11/2006 10:36:15 AM |
| Love it! But I'd like to edit out those two grains at the bottom of the raspberry. This will be up there among the best. |
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01/11/2006 10:03:20 AM |
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01/11/2006 05:20:08 AM |
| To dark background .. ice |
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