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| 05/10/2007 06:59:21 AM |
9by mia67Comment: I really like the compostion, the curves and tones. There is some dust, etc on the R that is distracting, and I'm not too sure aabout the shadowns, perhaps either more or less but they look a bit too cut off here.
Nie job, good subject for b&w.
Jack |
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| 05/09/2007 07:34:29 AM |
theatreby bucketComment: The bottom of the picture where the woman and child are is fantastic but hard to see due to the bright and high contrast of the rest of the picture. I'd consider cropping down to that, from just R of the air conditioner (?) and up to the horizontal line - I think that's where the real picture is.
Jack |
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| 05/09/2007 07:19:35 AM |
Giselleby MarioAngelComment: Really like this - beautiful lighting, great moment, nice and close and she looks very calm and secure. I really like the nice soft detail in her face with enough contrast not to look flat. My only suggestion is to sharpen around her eyes and perhaps her hair (duplicate layer, sharpen, mask out all but her eyes and some of the hair)
Great shot, really beautiful.
Jack |
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| 05/09/2007 07:14:19 AM |
Riding Homeby MarioAngelComment: Nice and grainy - not surprising given the iso. I see your at 1/15 sec and still really didn't get much blur, you may want to think about adding a bit in PS which would make this a bit more dramatic. I'd also think about making the blacks darker (ie the sky) and finally I would either clone or crop the light at the top of the photo.
Jack |
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| 05/09/2007 07:10:31 AM |
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| 05/09/2007 06:56:15 AM |
Old Boat Shedby sherpetComment: Great trytich, nicely processed, I'm sure they will love it. Great job.
Jack |
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| 05/08/2007 03:34:39 PM |
Maskby AlexSaberiComment: Wow, incredible lgiht and color - I'd really like to know the details behind this shot (actually all of your shots for that matter :-))
Jack |
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| 05/08/2007 03:23:29 PM |
Day 8 - Starlightby bdennyComment: Agree with the commments that have been posted, would also consider cloning out the bright lights in the ur corner.
Jack |
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| 05/08/2007 12:03:52 PM |
cactusby BAMartinComment: great silloutte, really nice sky as well. I find that the bottom third of the image is the most interesting - I really like the soft horizontal lines created by the clouds, I could almost see a variation of this with a crop just above the first branch on the R. Great job, Jack |
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| 05/08/2007 11:54:58 AM |
Iced Tea Stirrersby AliciaComment: Interesting shot, I really like these kind of candid shots and you've done it well. In a perfect world I think the lady on the R is distracting and a slight vignette or gradient may be help ful minimize her taking away from the main subject.
Nice conversion too.
Jack |
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