I used to be usefull
by matrix_morpheus

Comment:
I like the dof and simpleness of the composition here.. The only problem here is the colours.. It all seems a little brown-yellow ish and the contrast of that isn't exciting enough..

dont pollute feed me!!!
by itch

Comment:
The whites seem a bit too over exposed and make me sligthly cross eyed if I look at it too long.. other then that I think you should have added more of the clothes littered all over the floor.. they can definitely add more to your picture's storytelling ability and composition wise.. I think you should have chosen landscape rather then potrait to present your image..

Light Pollution... The Bane of my Hobby
by jlanoue

Comment:
Composition wise the trees are definitely unwanted but getting rid of them was not exactly not an option :D I think you've been slightly unsuccessful in getting the exposure just right.. The stars are good but the telescope obviously isn't in focus.. I think you should play around with more different lighting and dof's to see what fits you criteria best..

Disappointing sight on a hike
by AndyMac24

Comment:
The crop seeems to be slightly too tight.. maybe going backwards and getting more of the location or leaning in further would have helped..

A little ray of hope
by Judi

Comment:
I like the composition as it is but, for the sake of this specific challenge, more of a larger view should have been included in the composition to show what context you're projecting and a more concrete tie to the pollution theme

Lightdome Over Orlando - Polluting the Night Sky
by mwinner

Comment:
This image doesn't have anything specific too focus on that is it's biggest flaw.. we can see the light has been exposed well but maybe slight illumination on the bridge might have created more interest..

-River Of No Return-
by tfarrell23

Comment:
The tones are perfect and I like the pathway on the side..

Mirant's Alexandria Powerplant - Already Closed Once Due to Pollution
by treyvus

Comment:
I like how you've used repetition to create interest.. the light seems to be rather dreary.. I think using a contrasty b/w conversion might have emphasied the strong structural lines and bring out the details.

Rock & Roll Ain't Noise Pollution
by Simax

Comment:
Interesting and different interpretation.. but maybe the model should been facing the camera slightly more so the full impact of her expression could have been felt..

Beauty in the Undrinkable
by aliqui

Comment:
Very cool use of dof.. especially like the way the colour gradients..