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Saturday.jpg
03/11/2006 08:59:22 AM
Saturday.jpg
by dolphnz8

Comment:
First off I would lose the window frame - that doesn't add anything to the image at all. Then I would look for a suitable foreground object, maybe down by the beach.

I would have tried to get in the top of that cloud too, to allow the eye to know where the end was, as it is the cloud invites the eye to wander out of the frame at the top.

Hope that helkps a little
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Carnival Disguise
03/10/2006 06:31:56 AM
Carnival Disguise
by Michaels

Comment:
beautiful composition and colors. Deserves a ribbon.
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M3 - Woolf in sheep's clothing
03/10/2006 06:31:27 AM
M3 - Woolf in sheep's clothing
by Warby

Comment:
I want to know how you got this - such an extreme angle - ehat lens did you use?
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STONE-TO-TOOL-TO-FOOD
03/09/2006 11:01:01 AM
STONE-TO-TOOL-TO-FOOD
by dolikemagoo

Comment:
not following your logic here, but nice enough lighting
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On Cloud Nine
03/09/2006 09:16:54 AM
On Cloud Nine
by garrfoster

Comment:
Meets the challenge - that is its square, but it has little or nothing else to help it along. Lets look a little deeper.

Horizon - if you are cropping to square then why didn't you crop to level the horizon. This tells me you have not really looked at your own entry too closely.

Clouds - Nice interesting shapes, tones are a little over cooked in those blue shadows. Need to use the levels or curves function in PS to ensure that you don't kill the detail in the shadow.

Blue Sky - Not a lot of interest here, its using too much space, the horizon could have been 2/3 or even more up the image. Solid blue is 'bland'.

Point of interest - where does the viewers eye enter the frame, what path does it follow?, where does it come to rest? There is nothing of comfort for the eye, its free to flit around the frame and is therefore 'uncomfortable'.

I recommend doing some reading on composition and layout, read about the thirds rule, about leading lines, about foreground and background.

Hope some of this might have helped.
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My Heaven
03/08/2006 07:48:17 AM
My Heaven
by patio127

Comment:
horizon - check before you press the shutter or straighten in post processing.
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Reincarnation can be so depressing
03/08/2006 07:44:24 AM
Reincarnation can be so depressing
by Bankson

Comment:
hehe nice - I guess the dnmc police will be commenting on this ;-)
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Mysterious
03/08/2006 07:43:39 AM
Mysterious
by espy2

Comment:
not6 obvious enough - the dry ice needs to be much more prominent, but I like the idea
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Oh, the possibilities
03/08/2006 07:34:27 AM
Oh, the possibilities
by Elmakias

Comment:
prefer the black version of this ;-)
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A deep, dreamless sleep that lasts forever.
03/08/2006 07:33:19 AM
A deep, dreamless sleep that lasts forever.
by ksgant

Comment:
hehehe - love it ;-)

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