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03/11/2006 09:03:31 AM |
Nice colours. But as Falc pointed out the composition could be improved. As it stands it looks off-balance, and the window frame spoils it.
Go down to the beach and find something more suitable to 'ground' the shot. For example, fill up the bottom third of the shot with the beach, or driftwood, or boats, or whatever subject you think would add interest to the foreground. |
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03/11/2006 08:59:22 AM |
First off I would lose the window frame - that doesn't add anything to the image at all. Then I would look for a suitable foreground object, maybe down by the beach.
I would have tried to get in the top of that cloud too, to allow the eye to know where the end was, as it is the cloud invites the eye to wander out of the frame at the top.
Hope that helkps a little |
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