Leilana-Portrait-on-Black.jpg
by MinsoPhoto

Comment:
I think you have too much light on the hair and not the face. The most important part of almost any portrait is the face.

Don't get me wrong, the light on the hair is still good but you just need to move some light to her face. I would also adjust the light from hitting the back of her head to make it hit the top of her head and let it spill down onto the rest of her hair and shoulders.

Also I think your white balance is off some. Try adjusting it to somewhere around 5300k.

Message edited by author 2010-03-12 15:26:56.

I am this tall!
by Judi

Comment:
Look at you getting ribbons back to back, Congrats

Egg on Cradle
by davisambrose

Comment:
Minus 2 points for lack of creativity.

Escape
by shanksware

Comment:
Cute idea but I've seen this too many times. -2 for lack of creativity

Tastes Like Chicken
by HarveyG

Comment:
I don't get what this has to do with eggs.

Eggcersize to Become a Mighty Oak
by kawesttex

Comment:
I'm not much for woodies.

Guess who´s next?
by nicoleangel

Comment:
When I look at this photo the only thing I can think of is surely you could have come up with something better than this.. However it is a slightly funny concept.

in color
by liberty

Comment:
I think there is just too much going on in this image. I don't care for the colors either but that's just me.

Planet and Moon
by wheeledd

Comment:
I just don't find anything pleasing about this photo. When I stare at this photo I just can't find the thoughts that were in your mind.

The Birth
by blacjack

Comment:
This is a good creative photo but I think there is just too many whites in the image. It's just a little hard to see the egg.