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| 10/26/2006 09:38:21 AM |
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| 10/26/2006 09:37:37 AM |
GotNuthinby morg002Comment: Got Confidence? Got Sky! Got Tracks! Got Photo! Got Composition! Got My Interest! Got Hyperfocal Distance! Got Homage to Ansel Adams (in B/W!) Got Camera! Got Skills! You Go! |
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| 10/26/2006 09:23:13 AM |
Tracksby ElaineComment: My eye seems to be equally drawn to the well-focused trees as much as the RR tracks. I do like your creative efforts compositionally, and the tracks are acceptably well-focused, even though the tree limb seems to be the point of your camera's auto-focus sensor. A simple, but effective near-instant improvement IMHO would be to select the bottom half (just below the needles) in even a simple editting program, like Broderbund's Print Shop 15 (or Classic.) Then, increase contrast & brightness on the selected. Follow-up with select inverse, then desaturate, and lower the contrast & brightness.
Finally, it is sad, but none of what I just told you would have qualified for this challenge (since my suggestions are more for an Advanced Editting challenge,) but if you are just wanting to improve your digital technique/post-process skills (like I do,) then I believe that these are things that will help your portfolio & would be desired from anyone (pretty much the way I have been helped by DPC.)
My comments aren't the most expert here, but I hope that they will prove to be a "diving board" for progress. :) |
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| 10/26/2006 09:05:29 AM |
******by agenkinComment: I was just about to declare DNMC, but then I saw the "token" railroad tracks. IMHO RR or train is not actually the subject of this photo. The determined cyclist is the subject. Now, technically I'm seeing some pretty fine hyperfocal distance which makes the title, City Life. :) |
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| 10/25/2006 09:50:12 PM |
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| 10/24/2006 09:48:32 AM |
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| 10/24/2006 09:48:09 AM |
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| 10/24/2006 09:47:01 AM |
Old No. 7by GeneralEComment: I say it should be Old #9. It would be Old #10, except that the focus is a little too complex for my taste. ;) |
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| 10/24/2006 09:43:18 AM |
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