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Challenge: Trains & Railroads (Advanced Editing IV)
Collection: 2006
Camera: Canon PowerShot S400
Location: St. Louis MO
Date: Oct 19, 2006
Aperture: f3.5
ISO: not listed
Shutter: 1/60s
Date Uploaded: Oct 21, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 173 out of 196
Avg (all users): 4.7103
Avg (commenters): 5.6667
Avg (participants): 4.4804
Avg (non-participants): 4.9196
Views since voting: 496
Views during voting: 334
Votes: 214
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/28/2006 11:55:59 PM
This photo does quite have enough in it to draw the viewer. I feel there is no real point of interest.
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10/26/2006 10:34:27 PM
Great contrasts with the tree and the track, well done DOF.
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10/26/2006 09:23:13 AM
My eye seems to be equally drawn to the well-focused trees as much as the RR tracks. I do like your creative efforts compositionally, and the tracks are acceptably well-focused, even though the tree limb seems to be the point of your camera's auto-focus sensor. A simple, but effective near-instant improvement IMHO would be to select the bottom half (just below the needles) in even a simple editting program, like Broderbund's Print Shop 15 (or Classic.) Then, increase contrast & brightness on the selected. Follow-up with select inverse, then desaturate, and lower the contrast & brightness.
Finally, it is sad, but none of what I just told you would have qualified for this challenge (since my suggestions are more for an Advanced Editting challenge,) but if you are just wanting to improve your digital technique/post-process skills (like I do,) then I believe that these are things that will help your portfolio & would be desired from anyone (pretty much the way I have been helped by DPC.)
My comments aren't the most expert here, but I hope that they will prove to be a "diving board" for progress. :)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/23/2006 07:54:47 PM
Nice
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10/23/2006 07:11:00 PM
Hmmm.. I think the reason this picture doesn't "PoP" out at me is because the tree is too distracting. I would like to see more track. Good idea though.
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10/23/2006 04:45:41 PM
too bad you got that ugly wall to contend with. Nice concept.
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10/23/2006 01:16:42 PM
The tree's are a little heavy on the top. I wish you could have been lower when you took this.
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10/23/2006 02:13:22 AM
I find that there is nothing to "wow" me in this picture. It would have been better if there had been a subject apart from the tracks.
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10/23/2006 12:30:51 AM
too much blocking the top
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