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| 07/18/2006 11:47:36 PM |
The Pierby manic35Comment: Seems a bit overprocessed with the lines in the sky, and I'm not sure what the coloring is on the pier itself, but it seems unnatural. Looks like a great location though and I like the way the pier leads out and disappears. |
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| 07/18/2006 11:44:49 PM |
A birds eye viewby KHoltComment: Almost didn't catch the bird sitting there. A great perspective! Beautiful! |
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| 07/18/2006 11:39:10 PM |
Hi, I'm Floydby BlackNewfsComment: Ok, this little pup is just too cute. Love the posed ears... what a patient little model! |
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| 07/18/2006 12:13:21 AM |
Passing Lanesby pwm6Comment: Hmm.. a cracker? I like this! Abstract without being too awkward and strange, and the border is nice too, neat but unobtrusive. Well done! |
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| 07/17/2006 01:04:36 PM |
Ten Widdle Toes On Two Widdle Feet.by KitaComment: Just going through the results, and was sad to see this one in 128th place! I love the shallow DOF and the focus, and even though I'm not really fond of feet photos I still like this one. Definately one to be proud of... keep up the great work! |
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| 07/16/2006 11:10:53 AM |
Stargazer Lilyby MaagicComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
First Impression:
Nice vivid coloring in the flower. Background is a bit busy and distracting. I like the angle, it's a bit different than a plain old straight flower, but overall the photo still doesn't have a lot of "wow" to bump up the score.
Composition/Background:
As I mentioned in my first impression, I like the angle (though some folks aren't such a big fan of that), and the background is a bit busy for me. I like the bokeh you got from the ground, but I find the blues and oranges (people?) a bit unnatural. I also can't quite figure out what the blue-green thing is on the stem of the flower... a ribbon? My suggestions would have been to shoot from a slightly higher angle to avoid getting the people in the background, or to maybe have cropped a bit more from the bottom and right so that the flower itself isn't so centered.
Technicals:
Looks like you had some nice lighting here with the flower petals getting the majority of it. You handled it nicely, with only a few tiny areas of the white being blown out. Focus seems sharp on the flower as it should be and the dof is well done.
Post Processing:
Not sure what post processing went into this shot since you made no mention of it in your Photographer's Comments. Perhaps a slightly different crop would have helped to not only remove some of the busy background, but also would have given us more of a look at the interesting details of the flower itself. Also, a slight run through the USM filter might help to sharpen it up a bit.
Last Thoughts:
A nice photo, but in a challenge where voters are looking at hundreds of flowers, to get a higher score you really need to make yours stand out which is why I think your score ended up at a 5.000. Seems that two of the commenters from the voting period also found the background to be a distraction, which is something to keep in mind when framing your picture before you click the shutter.
I hope you found this critique helpful. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions. |
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| 07/15/2006 10:57:21 PM |
Hind-Sight is 20/20by dolphnz8Comment: Ohhh, one of those groaner titles! Can't quite figure out what the background is, but it's neat how it picks up the colors in the flies. |
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| 07/15/2006 10:55:57 PM |
On the edgeby ClayaComment: I'm going to just tell myself that you set a pair of shoes up there on the edge to help with the fear of heights... very convincing perspective! Also like the symmetry of the yellow lines leading in. Well composed. |
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| 07/15/2006 10:54:34 PM |
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| 07/13/2006 06:43:29 PM |
SOUTHERN BELLSby bonnettComment: Greetings from the Critique Club!
First Impression:
Very unique flowers. Like the colors, good focus on the front flower. Seems a little dark.
Composition/Background:
I like the way you got the two full flowers, and the buds in the shot. The focused flower seems a bit too centered for me. Perhaps changing the angle slightly at which you shot this one, or cropping differently to get rid of some of the fencing. But personally, I think I like the feel of that fence/wood background. Depending on what angles you could have shot at, maybe using the spiral of the iron fence as a leading line into the picture with the flower in front of it?
Technicals:
Love the color and sharpness of the front flower. Perhaps a slightly wider dof to get the second flower in focus as well. Otherwise, I think you did well technically.
Post Processing:
Difficult to comment on the processing of this photo, since nothing is listed in the photgrapher comments. This would have been a good opportunity to bump the light in some of those darker areas though, unless you were deliberatly aiming for this type of lighting.
Overall:
In a challenge such as flowers, which allowed advanced editing, you need a shot that has a bit more "wow" to it in order to get those high scores. Voters get tired of looking at flower after flower, and while I think the color and technicals were good, there just wasn't enough pizzazz here to get voters to look for more than a second and click on that 5, which is where most of your votes were.
Keep up the good work, and looking forward to seeing more of your shots in future challenges!
I hope you found this critique helpful. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions. |
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