Preserve life. Save water.
by Louison

Comment:
Good lighting. Where's your light source? Underneath? I think your focus may be a little soft, but overall well done and nice to look at. 7 -danny

The Money Shot
by johnm

Comment:
Excellent representation of the topic. I like this. I wouldn't mind a second light source to lessen the hard shadows on the right. 7 -danny

Follow the guiding light to your local House of Worship
by Drake

Comment:
Sometimes even a great beam of light doesn't make a shot. The church with the house next to it and the white in front of it seem to actually bring the shot down instead of lift it up. I'm sure it's a nice church and all, but the muted tones and composition seem off balanced and flat. 5 -danny

AFTER SHOPPING
by Reza1968

Comment:
Don't you wish you could use the dodge tool and lighten the left side of that bag some? That and a crop to exclude most of the left wall would make for a better composition. The left wall doesn't add anything to the presentation, it just pulls the eye away from the subject on the bag. 6 -danny

Camouflage
by basia03

Comment:
I think this is a good idea and composition, what got you here is the colors. What was the reason for changing your hues? Where'd the pink come from? You could have boosted the red and blue without introducing the pink and the shot would have been stronger in my opinion. 5 -danny

God Loves You
by glimpses

Comment:
Don't you just love room light and shallow depth of field. It can make almost any object stand out from its surroundings. I also feel that the center composition works well here. 7 -danny

They say guns don't kill people...Tell that to her mother!
by TooCool

Comment:
I'm sorry for the loss. I think that a more dramatic view of the gun and just part of the torn image may have made a stronger impact to the viewers. Sometimes in photography less is more. 5 -danny

"I do"
by Allyrellia

Comment:
That's what a chinchilla looks like? Cute lil buggar! I'm sure it was difficult to get the guy to stay still long enough for the shot, but your overall focus even on the monitor is soft. To get the 'ad' feel you're wanting, you need a tact sharp focus. A sharpening in your editing software after resize will help some. 5 -danny

Drink, Drive, and Die!
by PDavis

Comment:
Not sure the capabilities of your camera, but did you try a portrait mode view looking at the underside of both feet, shallowish DOF and the beer bottles and keys on the bed in the foreground? Something that would look more like an ad compain and not a hodge podge of ideas. 5 -danny

"I'm Sorry... It won't happen again" (Propaganda of an abusive spouse.)
by FactoryX

Comment:
Hrm... I can see a statement of you meaning to have the soft focus and underexposed shot, but to me it makes the image seem more of a snap shot than a planned shot. Did you try a black and white conversion with higher contrast? This might have given you more of an artistic interpretation. 5 -danny