On Track
by CLarson557

Comment:
These are all strong crisp shots that flow together wonderfully in this composition. Great work. 10

The Boldt Family
by autool

Comment:
Funny concept. But for this simple (and not inately interesting) of a subject, these macros need to be in sharper focus, and I would personally prefer more dramatic lighting or more contrast between subject and background. 5

Bud ~ Yellow Tulip
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
The yellow boarder is a bit overpowering. Something more mild would be better, or maybe just plain black for contrast.

Watch out...
by xertion

Comment:
In your main shot here, it looks like your focus might be locked onto the eyelashes or the area around the eye, instead of the eye itself, which isn't in sharp focus. Having messed around with many eye shots myself (and having submitted an eye series to this challenge) I know this is hard to avoid, but mostly you just have to experiment a lot to see what works.

Success
by rj324

Comment:
A single frame of one of these shots would work out pretty well, but together it just becomes redundant, and nothing seems to be gained by the repetition, since they each have a different background, but they all still look pretty much the same.

Narcissus
by salparadi

Comment:
I'm really not sure why there's all that black space at the bottom, but a tighter frame would definately help here. I like the middle shot, because the captured expression seems the most authentic, and it seems to be the most genuine representation of the person (who I'm guessing is you). Maybe instead of different expressions this could have been done with different zooms or angles instead. I do like the extreme contrast effect, and how you worked the background into it. The abstract result works well. 7 (mostly for the center frame)

Joy, Comfort, and Love
by dacrazyrn

Comment:
There's some interesting photoshop work here, but this still isn't a multi-image composition, it's just one image with some frames laid over it. However, I do like how each of the frames represents a different crop of the shot, each of which would be very effective (especially the top two). It's a good shot, but only by the farthest stretch of imagination does this fit the challenge. 4

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retired, but still attracting people
by kenbo

Comment:
The bottom two shots come across as cluttered.

Salt & Pepper
by severin

Comment:
A great concept, and a beautiful study in patterns of black and white. I think this shot would be helped greatly if all three frames were more crisp, as the salt/pepper shakers all seem to have too much blur to them. Nice work. 8

What color do you like?
by Pep Ventosa

Comment:
This is a very cool idea, and it's executed well.The different colors are very effective. I like how the images are progressive, but also overlap a bit. Nice work. 8