Fashion Statement
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
Would this be for the glasses or the jewelry or make-up? This more looks like a senior portrait because of all the distracting elements. If you were thinking glasses, lose the earrings and necklace or vis a versa. If you were thinking make-up, loose all the accessories, including the glasses. Hope this helps and as always, this is all just IMHO.

Fille De Mode
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment:
Very cute with attitude! Such a grown-up face too!

Terpsichore
by dpjerry

Comment:
Terpsichore the "Whirler" is the muse of dancing and is often seen dancing with her lyre and a plectrum, an instrument used for plucking stringed instruments. By the river god Achelous, she bore the Sirens.

Nice faceshot but I don't feel like your title portrays the shot. That aside, excellent lighting, focus and comp. This could be an ad for Dove moisturizing products or similar. One tiny picky thing...her neck and face color don't match.

Bumping up after 2nd pass and comments.

Blinding light of real life
by LevT

Comment:
I really think a different angle on this shot would have served better. The garbage cans outside and the other store fronts or buildings detract from this shot. Maybe a shallower DOF?

Daphney
by bravo six

Comment:
Popping out, Daphney. So is this fashion or pin up? This shot is beautifully executed, awesome focus on her eyes, yet somehow I get the feeling that isn't what most folks are going to notice first. I'm going to bump this up, after a second look. It is a technically sound shot and amazing job with basic editing.

Eddie Bauer Earthtones
by trnqlty

Comment:
You don't really see many fashion spreads or catalog work with the guy squating these days but this is a good shot.

Lament in Satin
by toffle

Comment:
Very Geena Davis looking! Oh some pearls in her ears would be perfection!

Blue
by Kivet

Comment:
I think this is a pretty good high key type shot but the model should have her chin raised a bit and maybe the hair slicked back sort of severely so that it doesn't draw attention away from her face.

Boy model
by birgir

Comment:
Handsome but I'm not liking the b/g. The snow and siding disect him thru the legs then where the siding is joined up higher, disect him thru the eyes. Maybe only getting the blue siding (great texture for a b/g) and not the snow would have improved this shot, IMHO.

Ne me touchez pas
by Ennil

Comment:
I see this is more PORTRAITURE than Fashion. Maybe if she were holding up a pretty bottle of perfume?