| Author | Thread |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
02/26/2006 07:22:23 PM |
| great shot, but color looks a little flat on my screen. May be my laptop - 8 |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/26/2006 04:18:30 PM |
| I like how your eye starts with her face, follows her arm on the right up and back to her face again. Neat composition. Also, like the highlights in her eyes. 10 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/26/2006 02:12:56 PM |
| I don't get the title at all. What's this got to do with dancing or choral singing? |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/25/2006 04:16:00 PM |
Terpsichore the "Whirler" is the muse of dancing and is often seen dancing with her lyre and a plectrum, an instrument used for plucking stringed instruments. By the river god Achelous, she bore the Sirens.
Nice faceshot but I don't feel like your title portrays the shot. That aside, excellent lighting, focus and comp. This could be an ad for Dove moisturizing products or similar. One tiny picky thing...her neck and face color don't match.
Bumping up after 2nd pass and comments. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/24/2006 12:23:56 PM |
| don't like how the arm is cut off, makes for the appearance of a floating hand |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/24/2006 12:11:26 PM |
| This looks pretty authentic as a personality or celebrity spread for a fashion magazine. It could be a little richer looking color-wise. Still, I like the pose, the makeup, the composition, and her confident expression |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/23/2006 06:36:58 PM |
| don't like her expression and would have liked more make up and more of what shes wearing.. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/23/2006 12:07:27 AM |
| Nice composition, great looking model, I just wish the eyes were a little sharper. There appears to be some slight blurring. All in all, still a very nice shot. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/22/2006 10:49:43 PM |
| Very good lighting (in my humble opinion) and a nice expression captured. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/22/2006 09:54:16 PM |
| well thought out composition - the background, her outfit and her eyes seem to be all related in color, which I really like.. the cropping, the focus are all excellent. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/22/2006 11:14:19 AM |
| I like the pose, and I can see where this might be used as a cosmetics advertisement. The lighting seems a little harsh - or maybe a little cool. Warmer lighting might make her look a little younger and a little friendlier. Here she looks 'fierce', which may or may not have been the intention. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
02/22/2006 10:40:42 AM |
| This model has very good facial features and structure in jaw line and eye expression. Very balanced features. I also love the pose. Make up is an issue though. Unfortunately, her face make up seems to enhance the flaws rather than mask them. The lines under the eyes and on the forehead needed to be masked with make up for this type of shot, which I believe is a make up fashion shot. Other than that, a very pleasing photo. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/23/2024 11:04:57 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
