Lunamosity
by SJCarter

Comment:
This is great I really like how you filled the frame with it. great color and detail. I think the background might be a litle too out of foucs. looks like the moth is floating.

The inner circle
by gprinsloo

Comment:
well I agree that this photo is way to dark you lose your viewer trying to make out a subject. I cant say alot more about this since I barly make out a subject. sorry that so many people get hung up on titles.

Bridge (gone) to greener pastures
by gprinsloo

Comment:
I like the flow of the water but there is a lack of color in the photo. like someone mentiond below use of a filter or small app. is what you would need to do.

Sounds Metallic
by gprinsloo

Comment:
I think the angle is what hurts since you took it laying down then flipped the photo it has a weird distracting look to it. I had a real hard time looking at it. The light isnt great reflecters could have helped. also when you use a backdrop or anything make sure you cover all the background unless it is on purpose I'm talking about the botom right hans corner it is a bit distracting. the red works well with the black.

Sailing across the world
by carlos

Comment:
good sharp detail have no idea how this goes with communication. one thing i noticed is the mast seams to be tilted to the left a bit. there is a litle clutter but i think the sky helps alot by giving it a simple yet good background. framing really helped with this too. This is a pretty common mistake but one alot of people including myself make a ton is shooting in the midle of the day in your photo it cast shadows directly down onto the sail. I think sunset or rise would have given the sails a warmer feel.

The Accordion Player
by cheekymunky

Comment:
Great shot for a candid. The shirt is overexposed and his face has a really hard shadow which is unatractive on pics especially since the photo goes off both ends im sure it would show on the levels. Good background for the subject it really shows that he is a street preformer.

Corn cob building
by puzzled

Comment:
I like the pattern this abstract view creates. I'm assuming that we are seeing the suns reflection in the windows which is a great addition to this photo. nice use of a frame it helps end the pattern without feeling like your missing somthing.

Welcome Gate Print
by jpochard

Comment:
I like this one too I would like to see more of the gate. the photo looks like you tryed to age it I don't know what it is but there are light spots on the door and bottom of gate. maybe it just my screen coputers not mine kinda cheap but good job framing both of these, you used good text to complement each photo.

Message edited by author 2005-07-15 02:26:00.

Dayton Lane Home
by jpochard

Comment:
Great colors on the front of the house' the roof and sky are really overexposed. A litle more view on the right would be nice so you can see the whole flag.

Fufanu
by Burger_BMX

Comment:
great photo you should consider sending it in to a couple mags