Forbidden Snack
by amonteforte

Comment:
I appreciate the humour and the concept .. but it does not make me smile. I know it very very very difficult but I am really distracted by the skin imperfections, even this shot. Please not offense. 6. lionel
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Head Up!
by Remie

Comment:
I like the way you handle the background.
Went back to see if you called it 'Blonde moment'
7. Lionel

It's a Stitch Eat Frog World
by jenarom

Comment:
I like it ... funny and make me smile (and that was not guaranted tonight!) . 7. Lionel

HayAgain, How About Some Carrots Lady?
by Gallatin

Comment:
Love that shot .... GREAT JOB 9. Lionel

Un-Forbidden Fruit
by autool

Comment:
Very good humour. and realisation. Passing on the distracting 'stuff' in the background. Good luck

Silly Boy
by Sonifo

Comment:
Nicely silly :-)6. Lionel

A site to see from the square
by Yomi

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice color and exposition. A lot of details .. a little too busy.

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - The fountains and the trees/plants brings nice colors. I would have croppe on the right just before the pole and on the left just between the 2 lights on the left of the fountaint. I think this way you keep the essential and the scene looks better.

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Very Good night exposure exposure and depth of field.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the shot for the colors and the water ... but I think it's too busy (see comments above).


Lionel

Traveling Through Hidalgo
by JEM

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Good composition, nice colors, look overexposed

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - The composition and the content seems very good to me. But even to suggest to say with a heavy sun I think the background is too bright (The donkey by itself is fine).
The wall looks pure white and we're missing details and coors on the cushion.
I think you brought the right items for this composition .
I like a lot the story it tells and the animal is in a nice osition.
Color would be deeper as well (except if it does not convey what you wanted to convey). I would definitly try some leevl adjustement.

BACKGROUND : Significant in the 'story telling' part of the picture. too bright really even if that way it detach the donkey more.

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- See above. I think the exposure (if you do not have any processing) is too high. The wall in the background seems all pure white pixels without details.

DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - Could afford some processing to adjust the levels.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the shot but I am really distracted and bothered by the overexposed part of the picture. The story and the very good framing still make it a nice picture.

Lionel

Message edited by author 2003-01-12 20:18:28.

So that We May Be Free
by Yomi

Comment:
I would not have frame the 'stick' of the flag' in front of the grave. Stil a nice shot. 7 Lionel

Good Vibration
by Harz_Joerg

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice colors, Good Idea, Miss the hand playing them, empty lower right corner.

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - I like the content a lot, Light is nice with the 2 black parts like balancing each other. It seems to me that the lower right corner is a litle 'empty' whithout 'defining' the rest. I like the colors a lot the green and yellow/gold mix is very nice.
I like being able to see the texture of the wood.

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Good depth of field and exposure. I guess it was not easy to balance the light correctly.

DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - Nothing specific to say so .. perfect to me.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like this photography and I think the colors and the angle , because unusual, are very nice. I like the color a lot. Looking at the picture I keep thinking like 'what make the string vibrates and keep wondering igf it would have been nice seeing the hand finishing the movement in the lower right part of the shot.
Anyway it's a nice shot. Congratulations.

Lionel