Hooked on Kiwi
by bamaster

Comment:
Hook a little dark and fades a little too much into backrgound. I'd like to see it a little more. Perhaps using a silvery one instead of black might help it show up more (if you agree with me on that point, of course if you don't and wanted it to fade into the background your choice is spot on;)
Lovely light through the fruit.
8, Kavey

Heartburn
by jperez1690

Comment:
Fun! Colourful!
6, Kavey

KiwiBerry
by Chilly0999

Comment:
I'd like more detail in the strawb skin. Good composition and lighting.
6, Kavey

Peach Explosion
by floyd

Comment:
Very erotic - I am sure you've had THAT comment over and over :)
Incredibly striking composition and wonderful red colours. I'd like the yellow to be richer - I think that it's beautiful but am distracted by my thoughts that the peach is unripe!
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Kavey

Twisted Granny Apple
by alanfreed

Comment:
Great shape but too closely cropped in frame for me. Also need a little more light on lower right of apple.
6, Kavey

Apple Juice
by lumbardh

Comment:
8, Kavey

Private Thoughts
by KarenB

Comment:
Though I am certain the very high contrast is intentional, I am not keen on it, but I like the contents and composition of keys, white space and angle of text.
7, Kavey

Childhood Wishes
by Edward Main

Comment:
Nice close crop, wonderful colours. Is the knot in the pine table which is positioned at the top right corner intentionally included?
6, Kavey

Mirror Of Childhood
by lionelm

Comment:
Unusual angle and like balance of tree branch - would like a little more of it included. Great sky and clouds, and content in mirror well positioned.
7, Kavey

When Wishes Came True
by indigo997

Comment:
I like the composition and colours. Candles have come out really well.
About focus - I'd like the secondary items (everything but the cake) to be either right in focus or much more out of focus.
:)
5, Kavey