Playtime is over
by Chilly0999

Comment:
The jumbled heap of colours and shapes makes this an interesting abstract visually, while the subject matter also feels familiar and holds memories.
7, Kavey

Early Morning Hunt
by Sonifo

Comment:
Great perspective and colour.
Not keen on background trellis and whatever the metallic items to right of frame are.
7, Kavey

With love from Grandma, on my 4th.
by HBunch

Comment:
Aaaaaaaaw! Nice layout with nothing distracting in background. Bear too light against chair which is too dark. Like addition of roses for colour.
6, Kavey

Constant Companion
by syamjonimi

Comment:
Unusual composition and angle, makes good use of the landscape orientation for a subject that most might put into portrait. Like the match between the colour of her clothes and the background velvet.
6, Kavey

Corner Drugstore
by myqyl

Comment:
Original idea. Composition - layout of objecrs on table, not too exciting. Paper serviette cropped off at right. Because of pattern on tablecloth perhaps needs to be shot from right overhead in order to get those lines accurately horizontal and vertical within the frame. Or muss the table cloth up much more so they are deliberately off the vertical and horizontal. Colours a little dark.
Kavey

I get the window!
by lynnesite

Comment:
This is great, but I like it better without the window at the top. Perhaps crop at top and also at left.
6, Kavey

Hana
by muckpond

Comment:
Lovely shot. I can feel the softness of her back - the light on it is beautiful. I think it would be nice to have just a little side light on her face, to separate the skin of her face from her hair.
6, Kavey

Pen Envy
by KarenB

Comment:
Like the movement and the composition, with it's clever use of white space and the subtle shadows.
5, Kavey

Ticonderoga Cutting
by mcmurma

Comment:
This is just beautiful, and also clever. I don't like the way the rest of the glass is cut off. I think if you're not wanting the stem etc in your frame maybe it would work better with a regular tall thin tumbler so there would be no need to crop some out?
7, Kavey

Find the Pencil
by #1 Bronco Fan

Comment:
This is a graphical composition, the shape of the shirt is bold and so is the colour. I think the carpet beneath it detracts hugely from the shot in terms of colour and texture (though perhaps texture might be OK if the colour was different). Perhaps because of the pink carpet, it doesn't appeal to me visually.
Kavey