Under Seas Flora
by BAMartin

Comment:
Critique Club


Initial thoughts
Great colour Γ’€“ love the combination of black and yellow. Composition seems random.

Composition/ Content
I like the way that some of the content is in the light and some is in shadow. I am struggling to find a point of focus Γ’€“ a hook into this picture. I do like that there is some negative space at the top of the frame.

Background
A good rich black Γ’€“ I think that helps make the yellow seem more vibrant.

Camera Work - Technical
It seems that detail/ texture is missing from the fronds under bright light Γ’€“ though itΓ’€™s hard to tell what detail they actually have.

Fits The Challenge
Yes

My Opinion On The Photo
Great colours, but for me this lacks a focal point and hook.

Sink Life at Happy Hour
by Malokata

Comment:
I'm sorry this didn't do better - I think it's one of the more creative ideas in the challenge and has humour, visual impact and strong composition...

Dreams of a Bay Window
by mbardeen

Comment:
I like the atmosphere of this - kind of sad and full of longing. It also makes me think of someone sitting inside in the dark looking out of each of these windows. I am not sure about the gradiated separator lines.

Streetrod
by crabappl3

Comment:
Nice individual images, though two are a little overwhelmed by the wonderful yellow one. I find the borders a little confusing. There are three images but the red border seems to combine two of them. That doesn't work for me,
I think the two images on the right are the strongest, individually.

Lick It, Slam It, Suck It
by rickhd13

Comment:
I really like this - especially the first of the three images. A great story within a triptych/ tryptich (I can't remember and now neither looks right!).

On Track
by CLarson557

Comment:
Nice and simple idea. My preference would be for the images to be the same height and for the background to be plain.

Downtown
by ursula

Comment:
Great images! I really like the forms and lines you've captured. I think this composite needs thicker black borders between the images.

Heineken: Smooth and Refreshing!
by BigSmiles

Comment:
Clever - I like the change in scale from left to right. I think this is quite professional in appearance.

$peedVision
by RiderGal

Comment:
Nice images - good colour and I like the tight crops. Some of the reflections are a little distracting. Well put together also.

Thoroughbred Park
by RLS

Comment:
I think I'd really like this with the straight images, without the painting filters applied to them. Like the layout of the three images very much.