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04/30/2003 05:15:50 PM |
Critique Club
Initial thoughts
Great colour – love the combination of black and yellow. Composition seems random.
Composition/ Content
I like the way that some of the content is in the light and some is in shadow. I am struggling to find a point of focus – a hook into this picture. I do like that there is some negative space at the top of the frame.
Background
A good rich black – I think that helps make the yellow seem more vibrant.
Camera Work - Technical
It seems that detail/ texture is missing from the fronds under bright light – though it’s hard to tell what detail they actually have.
Fits The Challenge
Yes
My Opinion On The Photo
Great colours, but for me this lacks a focal point and hook.
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04/27/2003 11:25:21 PM |
| Nice... I like the way the yellow forms glow out of the black background. Good work. |
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04/25/2003 02:27:09 PM |
| Very interesting shot, I like your colors |
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04/24/2003 08:01:44 AM |
| interesting shot... the color stands out nicely here... good work :) - setzler |
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04/23/2003 06:17:44 AM |
| Nice artistic setup. I wish the light was a little more balanced and the plant in front was more in focus. |
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04/22/2003 11:11:29 PM |
| Great shot! Methinks this looks familiar, too. Excellent capture, I love the way the yellow stands out against the black background! |
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04/22/2003 11:24:17 AM |
| How inventive of you!!!!!!!!!!!! Great thinking. |
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04/22/2003 05:08:34 AM |
| Now this is a different view of flora! Good idea and well shot. The lighting is ideal here - 8. |
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04/21/2003 06:48:17 PM |
Hey - rockweed!!!! Are you really underwater, or is this an aquarium???
Glad to see something different in this challenge - you get bonus points for creativity. Very nice lighting. |
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04/21/2003 11:23:50 AM |
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04/21/2003 07:15:39 AM |
| Unique and engaging lighting here. |
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