yosemite falls
by Rikki

Comment:
Great composition. Very classical ... again. But I am going to go against the flow. The detail in the rocks seems to be 'smoothed'. Too much Neat Image? Or just a result of resizing?

river's edge
by Rikki

Comment:
Like the blue. But not a fan of soft water. Very effective composition. The gap in the trees leads very gracefully into the water and the lighter areas of the picture (maybe lighten this area a bit more?)

reflections
by Rikki

Comment:
My least favourite of the series. I just don't know where to look. Seems a bit chaotic compared to your, normally, very controlled photographs.

solitude
by Rikki

Comment:
Has all the the wrong ingredients for a good picture ... a messy nusy background, harsh lighting, big empty areas on the canvas. But it seems to work.

strength
by Rikki

Comment:
My immediate reaction was that you have wrongly titled this ... 'awe' or 'awesome' seem to be more appropriate ... and a lot of other people see that too. I wonder if you need so much space on the right of the picture ... it is a bit dead ... and has nothing of interest to draw the eye.

the overlook
by Rikki

Comment:
I like the composition ... and I don't think you need someone on that ledge. People in landscapes are there to give a sense of scale ... and there is no need for that in this picture. I think that the haziness of the waterfall area detracts from the image.

mirror lake
by Rikki

Comment:
Had a quick look at all six. This one stands out head and shoulders above the rest. Very classical. Good detail. Nice balance between water and the rest. A beautiful broken and rippled reflection. What could be changed? Nothing ... works as is.

I partly agree with the comments about the text. Seems too large for the picture and with the quotes makes it more important than the picture.

Dusk
by whiteroom

Comment:
Now I understand why the shadows were important on the similar pictures.

Cooling Off
by idnic

Comment:
I think that you need either more of the fan ... or none.

Forgotten Stroller
by snaffles

Comment:
This picture and location have so much potential ... and I don't think you have taken advantage of it.